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Red Sun

Stirring creatures from slumber
a soft glow of crimson red
casts long rays of golden flint
over face of earth
~*~

For Russell's "Red Sun" Contest
6/24/13

Copyright © Audrey Haick | Year Posted 2013

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November 25, 2013 at 4:09 PM

love this one, my friend - just dropping by to say hi. I'm getting worried that your xmas & birthday gifts have been lost in the post - will scan the receipt of posting for you but not sure if that will help trace it. If the pack doesn't arrive in, say, another 1 - 2 weeks, please choose something from Amazon and I'll get it sent to you xxx

July 25, 2013 at 2:33 PM

Annalise.... congrats *****SKAT

July 24, 2013 at 7:51 PM

Very beautiful....congratulations

July 23, 2013 at 6:10 PM

Stirring creatures...golden flint. Great lines and crisp original imagery. Congratulations on your win :)

July 23, 2013 at 11:07 AM

congrats on a fine win Annalise

July 4, 2013 at 5:21 PM

Annalise, a red glowing write. Great imagery - "casts long rays of golden flint" love it :)

June 29, 2013 at 3:09 PM

beautiful, my friend x - congrats on your wins : )

June 25, 2013 at 10:59 AM

utterly serene... a perfect moment masterfully penned..:) huggs

June 25, 2013 at 8:13 AM

Ah, so beautiful. Tremendous setting, Annalise! :)

Barbara Gorelick

June 25, 2013 at 7:31 AM

Nice..its a pretty picture. BG

Ravi Sathasivam

June 25, 2013 at 7:20 AM

Excellent. Enjoyed. Tfs

June 25, 2013 at 5:28 AM

Stunning visuals Annalise, all the best for Russell's contest :) love & hugs Wilma

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