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Red Sun

red sun glows in the distance
as yellow clouds form halo
stretching eyes along the path
that the sun travels

Red Sun Contest
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Victoria Anderson-Throop

July 10, 2013 at 1:57 PM

feels very Japanese....

Adarsh Raj

June 25, 2013 at 9:59 AM

I could see the beauty....:):):):)Adarsh.....

John Posey

June 24, 2013 at 6:57 PM

Well done, Richard. I wish you well.... Jake

Abdulhafeez Oyewole

June 24, 2013 at 2:06 AM

Aye poet friend. Good luck in the contest. AO

Matthew Horstkotter

June 23, 2013 at 12:10 PM

Very nice poem.

Richard Lamoureux

June 23, 2013 at 12:18 PM

Thanks Matthew

Harry Horsman

June 23, 2013 at 10:22 AM

oh you are sure the master of visual poetry,, and this is no exception....

Richard Lamoureux

June 23, 2013 at 12:18 PM

Your the greatest Harry, good for my ego;0)

Elai Cee

June 23, 2013 at 4:25 AM

hmmm... wonderful,..

Richard Lamoureux

June 23, 2013 at 6:35 AM

Thanks Elai

Donna Jones

June 22, 2013 at 12:49 PM

Awesome Richard.....:-)

Richard Lamoureux

June 22, 2013 at 1:30 PM

Thanks Donna, hugs Rick

Eileen Manassian

June 22, 2013 at 9:56 AM

I'm sure this one will shine like the rays of the sun. Halo...Love that word. Beyonce's Halo is one of my fav songs. My favorite lines... "Hit me like a ray of sun Burning through my darkest night You're the only one that I want Think I'm addicted to your light." The concept of sun and light have always been important to me, and I have many poems on this theme. This is a great write. Good luck.

Eileen Manassian

June 22, 2013 at 1:43 PM

Me too...If I'm in the pool...I never get out! Handstands and all....If I'm in the sea...same story... I love the sea....I love the water....I was once called a dolphin...Perhaps now i resemble another aquatic mammal, but....graceful none the less. ;) I'm in my element when I'm in the water!

Richard Lamoureux

June 22, 2013 at 1:31 PM

I can totally understand. For me it is sun and water

Poet Destroyer A

June 21, 2013 at 9:01 PM

Hello Richard, thank you for the lovely comment you left on my poem. --- this is a very lovely entry for Russell's contest. a nice traveling ray, love the horizon once it hits my view. good luck in the contest... hugs' :-) LUV~ LINDA

Richard Lamoureux

June 21, 2013 at 10:53 PM

You are welcome Linda