Red Sun

I squint at the big red sun 
In a sky full of pink clouds
And wonder what it looks like
On other planets

For Russell’s Red Sun contest, 21st June

morningdodoitsu

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Skat A

July 25, 2013 at 2:29 PM

Hi Jack.... congrats *****SKAT

Donna Jones

July 23, 2013 at 9:31 PM

Great take..wonderful picture..congratulations

Karen Anglesey

July 23, 2013 at 5:53 PM

So many dimensions in this short poem. Very nice. Congratulations on your win :)

Poet Destroyer A

June 26, 2013 at 5:20 PM

I love the squinting image.... and the beauty of wonder in your poem... I wonders if others admire on other planets... we are not alone... LOL... love it...LINDA

Monterey Sirak

June 25, 2013 at 7:44 AM

Good luck in the contest. This poem should be a winner

John Posey

June 24, 2013 at 6:59 PM

Great perspective! Ingeniously done... Jake

Abdulhafeez Oyewole

June 24, 2013 at 2:57 AM

Great Poem Jack. Good luck in the contest. AO

Matthew Horstkotter

June 23, 2013 at 12:32 PM

Nice poem.

Sara Kendrick

June 21, 2013 at 5:13 PM

Great curious mind that wrote this sure to win work..Enjoyed reading it this evening..Good luck in the contest..Thanks for the visits..Sara

Skat A

June 21, 2013 at 4:21 PM

I love your view Jack, now move on over so I can view and wonder by your side and squint my eyes without to the red sun... hugs *SKAT

Andrea Dietrich

June 21, 2013 at 3:26 PM

GOOD way to think of it, as an imagining. WEll, Jack. I am seeing yours last and I need to get off RIGHT now. See ya later, my friend. I am off to a late matinee!!

Constance La France

June 21, 2013 at 2:57 PM

Hi Jack, I love your Dodoitsu, it is very visual, best of luck, yes I wonder what sun other planets see, thanks so much for all your comments on my poetry, as you can tell I was on a writing spree, day off, so I just went for it, oh I had a scare with Violet Kitty a few days ago, but the vet said each day is a blessing when you are a sixteen year old cat, said she will be okay for now, let her eat and do whatever she wants and to just ignore the lump on her side, too old for surgery,

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