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Red Sun

Broken hearts behave as bright Morn' sun, hemorrhaging red staining all that has been touched, while pulled from loves grasp. Loves stain 6/21/2013

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Date: 6/24/2013 7:01:00 PM
Nice, very nice.... Jake
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Adam Hapworth
Date: 6/24/2013 7:38:00 PM
Glad you enjoyed. Thank you.
Date: 6/24/2013 3:00:00 AM
This is profound Adam. Well done and good luck. AO
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Adam Hapworth
Date: 6/24/2013 8:39:00 AM
Thanks :)
Date: 6/21/2013 12:55:00 PM
I believe you've got a winner here..I really ejoyed the read. Bg
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Adam Hapworth
Date: 6/21/2013 1:26:00 PM
Thanks :) Looks like I'll have some stiff competition, nice entry yourself.