Red Sun

Broken hearts behave as bright
Morn' sun, hemorrhaging red
staining all that has been touched,
while pulled from loves grasp.


Loves stain
6/21/2013
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Posey Avatar
June 24, 2013 at 7:01 PM
Nice, very nice.... Jake
Hapworth Avatar
June 24, 2013 at 7:38 PM
Glad you enjoyed. Thank you.
Oyewole Avatar
June 24, 2013 at 3:00 AM
This is profound Adam. Well done and good luck. AO
Hapworth Avatar
June 24, 2013 at 8:39 AM
Thanks :)
Gorelick Avatar
June 21, 2013 at 12:55 PM
I believe you've got a winner here..I really ejoyed the read. Bg
Hapworth Avatar
June 21, 2013 at 1:26 PM
Thanks :) Looks like I'll have some stiff competition, nice entry yourself.
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