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Night ship painting by Alexander Shenderov ocean painting night ...

'Midst cannon smoke the sun arose, blood red To spread the night's cold horrors on the bay Our tattered sails waved farewells to the dead Rain washing both our blood and shame away No more would beasts of war be freed or fed Or mankind's conscience let such madness lay. ~ 1st Place ~ in the "Each Letter Threads The Verse" Poetry Contest, Joseph May, Judge & Sponsor. * This is a form called "The Harrisham Rhyme", created by Harrisham Minhas, from Punjab, India. It is a six-line poem with the rhyme scheme: ababab. In this form, the last letter of the first word of each line, is the first letter of the first word of the next line. I hope you enjoy it! *

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Date: 5/2/2020 4:11:00 PM
Greg, congratulations on your win in Joseph contest. Hugs Eve
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 5/3/2020 8:05:00 PM
That's very kind, Eve, thank you so much! <3
Date: 5/1/2020 10:06:00 AM
Excellent win for an excellent verse, my friend!! Congratulations.
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 5/3/2020 8:05:00 PM
Thank you very much, Andrea - blessings, Buddy! <3
Date: 5/1/2020 6:23:00 AM
Wow! Congrats! God bless you.
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 5/3/2020 8:05:00 PM
Thank you, Beata - the same to you, Dear Poet! <3
Date: 4/30/2020 12:54:00 PM
The beauty of the lines I adore and the war they fought I hate.. Congrats for one more great Victory in the contest Gregory..
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 5/3/2020 8:04:00 PM
Amen - thank you so very much, Dear Poet - blessings, Jenish! :o)
Date: 4/30/2020 10:28:00 AM
well-done, Greg. On a personal level, the wars we fight daily no less significant. Thanks for the inspiration and a hearty Hurrah! for you top placement.
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 5/3/2020 8:04:00 PM
Indeed, you are correct, Sir - many thanks and blessings to you, Friend! :o)
Date: 4/30/2020 10:10:00 AM
Greg, excellent writing and congratulations on your win _Constance
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 5/3/2020 8:03:00 PM
Thank you so much, Constance! <3
Date: 4/30/2020 10:09:00 AM
BIG CONGRATS to win TOP.
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 5/3/2020 8:03:00 PM
Thank you very much, Anisha! <3
Date: 4/30/2020 6:18:00 AM
The horrors of war, Congrats on your win Greg
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 5/3/2020 8:03:00 PM
Many kind thanks, Joseph, for the comments and my placement - blessings! :o)
Date: 4/29/2020 11:48:00 PM
Dramatically moving piece, Gregory. CONGRATS on your win. Janice
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 5/3/2020 8:02:00 PM
Thank you so very much, Janice! <3
Date: 4/29/2020 11:05:00 PM
Congratulations Gregory on your top win.
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 5/3/2020 8:02:00 PM
Thank you so much, Sam! :o)

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