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Night ship painting by Alexander Shenderov ocean painting night ...

Red Sails

'Midst cannon smoke the sun arose, blood red

          To spread the night's cold horrors on the bay

               Our tattered sails waved farewells to the dead

     Rain washing both our blood and shame away

No more would beasts of war be freed or fed

          Or mankind's conscience let such madness lay.







~ 1st Place ~  in the "Each Letter Threads The Verse" Poetry Contest, Joseph May, Judge & Sponsor.

* This is a form called "The Harrisham Rhyme", created by Harrisham Minhas, from Punjab, India. It is a six-line poem with the rhyme scheme: ababab. In this form, the last letter of the first word of each line, is the first letter of the first word of the next line. I hope you enjoy it! *
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Roper Avatar
May 2, 2020 at 4:11 PM
Greg, congratulations on your win in Joseph contest. Hugs Eve
Barden Avatar
May 3, 2020 at 8:05 PM
That's very kind, Eve, thank you so much! <3
Dietrich Avatar
May 1, 2020 at 10:06 AM
Excellent win for an excellent verse, my friend!! Congratulations.
Barden Avatar
May 3, 2020 at 8:05 PM
Thank you very much, Andrea - blessings, Buddy! <3
Agustin Avatar
May 1, 2020 at 6:23 AM
Wow! Congrats! God bless you.
Barden Avatar
May 3, 2020 at 8:05 PM
Thank you, Beata - the same to you, Dear Poet! <3
Somadas Avatar
April 30, 2020 at 12:54 PM
The beauty of the lines I adore and the war they fought I hate.. Congrats for one more great Victory in the contest Gregory..
Barden Avatar
May 3, 2020 at 8:04 PM
Amen - thank you so very much, Dear Poet - blessings, Jenish! :o)
Poteet Avatar
April 30, 2020 at 10:28 AM
well-done, Greg. On a personal level, the wars we fight daily no less significant. Thanks for the inspiration and a hearty Hurrah! for you top placement.
Barden Avatar
May 3, 2020 at 8:04 PM
Indeed, you are correct, Sir - many thanks and blessings to you, Friend! :o)
La France Avatar
April 30, 2020 at 10:10 AM
Greg, excellent writing and congratulations on your win _Constance
Barden Avatar
May 3, 2020 at 8:03 PM
Thank you so much, Constance! <3
Dutta Avatar
April 30, 2020 at 10:09 AM
BIG CONGRATS to win TOP.
Barden Avatar
May 3, 2020 at 8:03 PM
Thank you very much, Anisha! <3
May Avatar
April 30, 2020 at 6:18 AM
The horrors of war, Congrats on your win Greg
Barden Avatar
May 3, 2020 at 8:03 PM
Many kind thanks, Joseph, for the comments and my placement - blessings! :o)
Canerdy Avatar
April 29, 2020 at 11:48 PM
Dramatically moving piece, Gregory. CONGRATS on your win. Janice
Barden Avatar
May 3, 2020 at 8:02 PM
Thank you so very much, Janice! <3
Kauffman Avatar
April 29, 2020 at 11:05 PM
Congratulations Gregory on your top win.
Barden Avatar
May 3, 2020 at 8:02 PM
Thank you so much, Sam! :o)
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