Red Rose

In the garden of the dead 
you'll find a rose so red, 
not red with beauty but red with hate
Withering away in a constant state

binded by burdens that forever bleed. 
Begging to bloom but can never succeed. 
Rain can try to wash away the blood, 
the crimson liquid mixes with the mud. 

Breeding more seeds to summon such pain, 
feeding the greed for personal gain. 
Soon the whole garden will be covered in red, 
but until that day I still am not dead.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Budd Avatar
March 12, 2010 at 1:04 PM
Wow. I love this. Interesting twist on roses. :)
Palli Avatar
March 12, 2010 at 1:19 AM
Red everywhere! Can see it well.
Devonshire Avatar
March 11, 2010 at 8:10 PM
Compelling poetry, Jacob. We writers tend to associate red with the beauty of the rose, but it is also a color of blood and pain. Love, Carolyn
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