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Red Queen Dethroned

Red Queen Dethroned Piteous, the limpid bloodstained rose stunned by Winter’s violent pose color draining onto hoar frost blade Red Queen, dethroned, to decompose beneath the howl of ice-bound serenade. Conception’s threshold - trembling roots nurturing the hope of fetal shoots huddled from the dismal bite of frost holding against the crush of heartless brutes Knowing spring is not a “Paradise Lost”* ©9/25/2017 *vague reference to - *Paradise Lost by John Milton submitted to – Rhyme Time with 5 – poetry contest sponsor – Laura Loo

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Date: 10/12/2017 7:11:00 AM
John, dark and wonderful, CONGRATULATIONS!
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Date: 10/10/2017 11:13:00 PM
Very creative and beautifully dark, John - congrats on your win! :-)
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Date: 10/10/2017 5:47:00 PM
Brilliantly penned John congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 10/10/2017 6:12:00 AM
one of my husbands favorite books, great rhythm and rhyme. thank you and congrats :)
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Date: 9/26/2017 9:17:00 AM
Excellent pen! As Nicola said, stunning :) xomo
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