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Red Neon Torii Gate

Is there a place for us Lonely souls In this big, glowing city? How ironic To feel solitarily In a city of fourteen million Been slinking in the shadows For a while now The light can be burning Frightening The shadows can be reassuring Rapid Train headache The view from the windows Street lights Feeling warmth from Only strangers The red neon torii gate Opens the door From the mundane world To the sacred Our home Of neon billboards With the loud BGM Pulsating through us Vividly This is where I belong Light and darkness Both embrace me In warmth and Serenity

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Date: 9/10/2019 12:52:00 AM
"How ironic To feel solitarily In a city of fourteen million" - I like this opening, and the middle and the ending very much. Well done! Welcome to Poetry Soup!
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Date: 10/16/2019 3:06:00 AM
Thank you so much for all your wonderful comments!! :D

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