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Red Musk Fragrance

As red musk fragrance from the steamed en suite escapes to her boudoir from oil essential jar a silken nightie trimmed with lace complete she slips light-fingered on to flawless skin then she adjusts the light soft glowing for the night with graceful movements lifts the sheets, turns in. Then on the pillow she lays down her head relieved to leave behind the weight of weary mind the balm of slumber she will seek instead. _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ Enclosed Rhyme contest Hosted by Dear Heart Placed 6th 27th September 2018

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Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 10/28/2018 12:03:00 AM

A beautiful poem Paul, Sensual and warm, filled with desire as she prepares to slumber. Congratulations on your win. Your nature shines through all your poems as gentle, loving and caring. Best wishes , Jennifer

Paul Callus
Date: 10/28/2018 9:46:00 AM

Your kindness and generosity are more than I merit, Jennifer! I am touched by your lovely comments. Warm regards // paul

Vladislav Raven

Date: 10/12/2018 5:54:00 AM

Hi Paul, the soft sensuality of this write sings into the mind with such gentle imagery. This write sings straight into the heart my friend. An excellent piece of poetry so gentle in its creativity. This write did read as a winner and i see it was. Congratulations on your win my friend, it is much deserved for this gentle creation. A fave. Have a wonderful Friday. Your friend always....Mike.

Paul Callus
Date: 10/13/2018 7:00:00 AM

It is always heartening to read your lovely comments, Mike. Thank you for your generosity, my friend. Have a nice weekend. Regards // paul

Constance La France

Date: 10/2/2018 3:23:00 PM

Paul, congratulations on your win in my contest with this sensual write ~

Paul Callus
Date: 10/2/2018 4:13:00 PM

Thank you, Constance. Always a pleasure to answer to your prompts and the inspiration they bring along with them. Regards // paul

Susan Ashley

Date: 9/30/2018 9:50:00 PM

The silken sensuality of your poem is as pleasing and alluring as the red musk fragrance in the air. So smooth and rhythmic and ever so lovely, Paul. Congratulations on your wonderful win and it's such a pleasure to share a place in the winner's circle with you.. Warmest wishes and hugs always my inspiring friend.. ~Susan

Paul Callus
Date: 10/1/2018 9:58:00 AM

It was also my pleasure to share the podium with you, Susan:) Your beautiful comments give my poem an added fine texture, maybe more than I deserve! ~ warm regards & Hugs, my friend. // paul

Ravi Sathasivam

Date: 9/30/2018 3:26:00 AM

Excellent. Very romantic and beautifully written poem. Enjoyed reading it.

Paul Callus
Date: 9/30/2018 5:19:00 AM

Your complimentary remarks are most welcome, Ravi...thank you! Regards // paul

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 9/29/2018 10:56:00 PM

Really well written and I loved the meter Paul. Congratulations on your win! : )

Paul Callus
Date: 9/30/2018 5:13:00 AM

Thank you, Connie. I was so pleased to see your entry placing high on the list:) Have a lovely day! Regards // paul

Line Gauthier

Date: 9/29/2018 7:29:00 PM

back with well deserved congrats, Paul. Well penned.

Paul Callus
Date: 9/30/2018 4:41:00 AM

Thank you, Line. Have a nice Sunday. Regards // paul

Charlie Smith

Date: 9/29/2018 11:15:00 AM

Beautiful Paul, another gem...

Paul Callus
Date: 9/29/2018 3:20:00 PM

You are too kind, Charlie...thank you! Regards // paul

Caycay Jennings

Date: 9/29/2018 8:37:00 AM

Loverly write, I agree with Arthur's word: 'soft.' So loverly and tender, Paul. All the best ... CayCay

Paul Callus
Date: 9/29/2018 4:03:00 PM

Thank you for the lovely comments, CayCay. Have a lovely weekend. Regards // paul

Arthur Vaso

Date: 9/29/2018 1:36:00 AM

Very soft and romantic, beautiful poem, Paul.

Paul Callus
Date: 9/29/2018 3:57:00 PM

Your feedback is appreciated, Arthur; thank you & Regards // paul

Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 9/28/2018 3:56:00 PM

This poem is so serenely beautiful - oh how I would love to sink into even just a little of that red musk fragrance right now! :-) A most lovely write! Hugs. Pandita

Paul Callus
Date: 9/28/2018 4:10:00 PM

Thank you, Pandita; a pleasure to have you stopping by with lovely comments:) Hugs // paul