Red Moon Rising

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This or That Vol 19 Contest ~ Sponsor: Edward Ibeh

August 2, 2023    __________________________ 

Beyond bright garish flashes of neon lights,
blaring music and drunken barroom fights,
it's my wish to find tranquility and solitude
within a realm where the moon is red-hued.
I'd gladly wander a crimson moonlit path,
far away from this world's uncivilized wrath.

Where warblers sing lullabies to me at night
while I watch a hungry owl take wing in flight.
Myriads of stars will be shimmering in the sky,
and in complete contentment I will peacefully lie.
As a red moon rising hovers far above my head,
I'll be sheltered without need of worry or dread.

In a quiet sanctuary of tall evergreen trees
I'd welcome the evening's cool flowing breeze.
With a blanket spread on meadowed grounds,
I'd revel with joy at Nature's awesome sounds,
like the trills of doves giving their mating call
and the muffled rumble of a distant waterfall.

There are no bastions here, nor fortified fences.
In this meditative place I can liberate my senses.
I'll be one with my surroundings, totally at ease,
as if I'm floating on calm waves of unruffled seas.
Far from cacophony that offends an idyllic repose,
beneath a sanguine moon, where no one else goes.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2023



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Date: 8/6/2023 8:37:00 AM
Heartiest congratulations on your top win in my contest, Lin:-) Outstanding poetry!
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Date: 8/6/2023 7:52:00 AM
"There are no bastions here, nor fortified fences. In this meditative place I can liberate my senses" - Beautiful. Congratulations!
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Date: 8/6/2023 8:22:00 AM
Thanks for your kind thoughts on my lines, Chris.
Date: 8/5/2023 11:00:00 AM
Congrats, that is a very close up look into the area that the red moon rose at. 10/10!
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Date: 8/5/2023 11:13:00 AM
Ahh what nice comments. Thanks, Miranda.
Date: 8/4/2023 11:21:00 PM
Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing your talent... exposed by this muse of yours, so delightful and delighting with vivid images, vibrantly presenting themselves in my mind... as I try to bask in serenity. God bless you.
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Date: 8/5/2023 11:12:00 AM
Thanks with gratefulness, Beata. Your compliments are appreciated.
Date: 8/4/2023 3:08:00 PM
Excellent poetry deserving of 1st place dear Lin, :)
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Date: 8/5/2023 11:11:00 AM
Thank you lots, Vie.
Date: 8/4/2023 12:28:00 PM
- Wow... what a gem ... beautiful poem, Lin - Congratulations on your top first place in the contest - hugs
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Date: 8/5/2023 11:10:00 AM
Thanks very much, Anne-Lise.
Date: 8/2/2023 7:05:00 PM
I love your expressive lines, like 'where the moon is red-hued' and 'calm waves of unruffled seas' - a majestic painting of peace -
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Date: 8/3/2023 7:06:00 AM
Thanks so much for liking these lines, Michelle. I appreciate your thoughtful comments.
Date: 8/2/2023 8:30:00 AM
A beautifully written poem Lin, peace and quiet longed for under a rising red moon, and a safe personal breathing space, such moments are rare for us city folk, I totally get it, I think Edward will too, A top entry for the contest methinks, cheers David
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Date: 8/2/2023 8:55:00 AM
Good afternoon, David. A Utopian sanctuary... a means of escape for even the span of a night would be an ideal getaway. Thanks for finding this one to your liking.
Date: 8/2/2023 6:34:00 AM
Your prowess as a poem shouts out from every line Lin, this is a breath taking poem, it would be a big winner in my eyes, good luck with the contest:-) hugs Jan xx the imagery and rhyme are incredible ...a massive fave:-)
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Date: 8/2/2023 7:04:00 AM
Having your positive comments is good enough for me, Jan. Thanks for liking it so much that you've added it to your fave list.
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