Red Mazda 323

It was a red Mazda 323,

with 4 on the floor, not 3 on the tree.

It was my first time to go,

and I wrecked it in the snow,

So, the ex-wife made fun of me.



For the "first car" contest
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Dietrich Avatar
March 14, 2012 at 8:48 PM
This limerick is SCHWEET. Big Congrats.
Bunton Avatar
March 15, 2012 at 6:10 AM
Thank You!!
Ball Avatar
March 13, 2012 at 3:47 PM
Very cute Christopher. However it's heartbreaking to lose something you treasure like that. You never forget your first love or your first car, and for a guy, the car is probably his first love. (smile) God Bless and thanks so much for your kind words about my first car. It's a true story. JB
Bunton Avatar
March 13, 2012 at 3:48 PM
Thank you!!
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
March 13, 2012 at 2:13 PM
Congratulations Chris, well done xx
Bunton Avatar
March 13, 2012 at 3:47 PM
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Sweetheart Avatar
March 13, 2012 at 1:11 PM
congrats Christopher on a grand win for this exciting entry on first car luv..
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March 13, 2012 at 3:47 PM
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Brown Avatar
March 13, 2012 at 7:19 AM
Congratulations on your win and thank you for supporting "My First Car" contest Christopher. Love, Carol
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March 13, 2012 at 3:47 PM
Thank you!!
Song Avatar
March 13, 2012 at 6:37 AM
Reads as fast as the car actually goes!! ha ha. This limerick is light and fun...delightful. Good luck in the contest, Christopher! Gwendolen
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March 13, 2012 at 3:46 PM
Thank you!
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