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Red Leaves

red leaves in wind rows
blow by several days breeze...
squirrels cower in nest

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Richard Lamoureux

Date: 11/11/2012 8:40:00 PM

Brrrr, I feel the cold wind on the back of my neck. You have a way of creating complex images with such few words.

Bl Devnath

Date: 11/4/2012 7:28:00 AM

Acute capture, beautifully done. Loved always, my friend, bl

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 11/3/2012 11:36:00 PM

Hi Sara, aweee.. poor squirrels... i like the image of the dancing red leafs... xox~pd

Kash Poet

Date: 11/3/2012 6:50:00 AM

Beautiful imagery in this haiku Sara!Enjoyed very much.

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 10/31/2012 3:39:00 PM

Nice haiku in this fall season. We did not have any effect from the storm. Did you have any ? We are in the middle of Canada and the only thing we get is the darn freezing temperatures or an odd tornado in the summer.

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 10/31/2012 11:47:00 AM

I have enjoyed reading your poetry today Sara. Hope to read more of it soon. Love, Carol

Ravi Sathasivam

Date: 10/31/2012 7:25:00 AM

Excellent haiku. Well said. Tfs

Harry Horsman

Date: 10/31/2012 5:06:00 AM

these are truly lovely autumn poems Sara, the Orphan was a childhood friend, he suffered badly at the hands of the Sisters of Mercy....

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 10/31/2012 2:38:00 AM

Lovely Haiku Sara. After the storm .... there are more leaves now? - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Russell Sivey

Date: 10/30/2012 4:14:00 PM

This is a fabulous and wondrous write my friend! I really enjoyed reading this incredibly delightful and very observant poem this evening! This piece sure talked about the storm on the natural level, about what happens to nature during the fierceness that Sandy brings us! We have had snow, constant blowing winds, and rain galore during this storm, quite the awful storm! This poem speaks the truth of this storm and the poor squirrels! What a special piece, Great Work!!

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