Red Hearts

The love in innocent youth
Always falling over itself
It's an ever changing thing
Touching only red hearts
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Breidenthal Avatar
July 2, 2011 at 8:46 PM
Ooh ROMANTICALLY AMAZING -David")
Morris Avatar
December 20, 2011 at 8:42 PM
... This poem is actually a satire... I was making of of the immature, haven't-got-a-clue "red hearts"... Which I very much was :P :)
Arvizu Avatar
February 1, 2011 at 5:56 PM
ya i know am very young yet most tell me am miture...no the less when i or my friends say where in love we say it childishly we get the taste not the real deal...so i get where this poem come's from this poem is a very excusite poem
Morris Avatar
December 20, 2011 at 8:42 PM
... This poem is a satire... (bites lip) though i wrote it to have only an implicit satirical tone and it is rather ambiguous... So it could be interpreted as sincere... Depends on what you want it to be. :)
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