Dr.Ram Mehta Poet Tyburn

Red Glow

Gargling   
Hurling
Glowing
Sprinkling
Gargling, hurling pumice, ash, tephra, 
Sprinkling glowing red lava trickle down.


Bursting
Firing
Flushing
Rushing
Bursting, firing red flames, cries, anger
Flushing, rushing lava, passion, power

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Sixth Place win
Contest: Sound of colors by Monterey

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Sara Kendrick December 12, 2013 at 5:04 PM Very descriptive of red..Way to go..Congrats..Sara

Roger Horsch December 11, 2013 at 7:18 PM Another well deserved win...Congrats....Roger

Poet Destroyer A December 11, 2013 at 8:30 AM nice winning sound. ..Linda

Joseph May December 10, 2013 at 7:18 PM congrats on your win Dr Ram

Donna Jones December 10, 2013 at 5:50 PM Awesome poem and form...congratulations

Andrea Dietrich December 10, 2013 at 4:06 PM very interesting one, Dr. Ram. It's cool to see the colors we poets chose. Congrats for your win.

Anne-Lise Andresen December 10, 2013 at 11:32 AM - Congratulations on your winning poem in: "THE SOUND OF COLOR" contest: Sponsored by: Monterey Sirak - Nice to join and nice to read your poem again Dr.Ram. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Monterey Sirak December 10, 2013 at 9:19 AM Wonderful poem. Every word is action and sound. Congrats and thank your for entering.

Joe Maverick November 24, 2013 at 11:34 AM Out-standing piece here good Dr, well brought renditiion of your perception...Take care Joe..)

Charmaine Chircop November 19, 2013 at 4:27 PM The feeling through imagery is transmitted profoundly..awesome.

Andrea Dietrich November 19, 2013 at 3:38 PM I like how this FEELS like what it is saying. Is it for the terse contest? It could even work for sound of red!!

Victoria Anderson-Throop November 19, 2013 at 3:21 PM an eruption of powerful imagery. well done.

Sara Kendrick November 19, 2013 at 9:18 AM Very descriptive work..Enjoyed reading this morn..I am glad that I chose it to read..Thanks for stopping by with congrats..Sara

Anne-Lise Andresen November 19, 2013 at 8:22 AM - Bursting colorful power ..... well done!! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)