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Red Dress

The Bar has just called time 
and he's spent what was his last dime
Ladies and gentleman please,
Continue to mutter outside in the gutter

Scarf and Hat , its time to leave,
Walk through the streets , encounter the deadbeats
To his place in this town that should have been knocked down
Unlock's the door pulls back the bolt
Nothing worth taking , so why so painstaking
His pride has been battered and his memories shattered
No charity taken , and be not mistaken
We put him there , its our cross to bear

Straightens her picture , then tells her hell miss her
Lips smudged on the glass his tears soon will pass 
Puts on the kettle and begins to settle
In for the night so turn off the light
Good night god bless
To dream the lady of the Red dress.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 11/9/2009 4:14:00 PM
I really like some of your word choices, they really make the poem come to life. My favorite from this passage is "continue to mutter outside in the gutter". Wonderful imagery!
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Date: 11/3/2009 10:54:00 AM
Emotion and loneliness here. Very good imagery, too. Keep the words flowing and your talent showing! Lovingly, Dane Ann
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Date: 10/5/2009 4:20:00 AM
Nicely done. I can feel the emotion here. Keep writing. Sara
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