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Red Door

warmth
behind
this red door
soft flames touching
smiles of lamps and pillows' glowing faces...
but fiery words can slam the mad red door            
anger heating
couple’s room
knifed words
rage

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 1/4/2012 11:07:00 AM

Congratulations on making it through the 1st round of PoetrySoup International Contest X 3. Wishing you the best in the finals Nette. Love, Carol

Joseph Osita

Date: 12/29/2011 2:50:00 AM

You have a unique way of writing that I enjoy. Congratulations for your 3 entries making it to the final round

Dalila Agtani

Date: 12/29/2011 12:48:00 AM

Very creative form Nette. How have you been? Congratulations! All of your 3 entries are on the top of the winner's list Lady, wow! I wish to meet you when I retire back home?? (A dream!) HAPPY NEW YEAR! Dalila

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 12/28/2011 6:13:00 PM

Wonderful wins with all 3 congrad's Light & Love

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/28/2011 5:56:00 PM

Your GREAT example of Tetractys has captured Soup's attention!! Congrats on getting all three of your poems thru to next round, Nette. I remember when I had three through. It feels great!!

Cory Long

Date: 11/19/2011 2:43:00 PM

congrats on your poem being featured cory

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 11/16/2011 6:34:00 AM

Congratulations on being featured this week Nette. Love, Carol

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 11/15/2011 8:24:00 PM

Congrats Nette luv on featured poem this week on PS.. a wonderful write to share with luv..my friend...soup mail...

Vince Suzadail Jr.

Date: 11/15/2011 1:52:00 PM

Congrats Nette on the featuring of "Red Door." Vince

Daver Austin

Date: 11/14/2011 1:51:00 PM

The "mad red door." A loaded line here. Warmth doesn't necessarily mean cozy, or pleasant, or loving. I like the idea of warmth can create a border line. Very original stuff, nette. Congrats on the selection. Love, daver

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 7/25/2011 10:06:00 AM

Congratulations on your well deserved win in Michael's "Smiles and Frowns" contest Nette. Love, Carol

David Williams

Date: 7/24/2011 10:17:00 AM

hey Nette, congrats on your win, David

Jun-Jun Villanueva

Date: 7/23/2011 11:47:00 PM

Congratulations on the another win. . .hehehehe . .smile *-* junjun

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 7/23/2011 3:54:00 PM

Congrats Nette luv on your wonderful win with this entertaining poetry my friend.. commenting is difficult but some seem to be managing ..patience required..luv..

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/23/2011 11:51:00 AM

HI, Nette, yours was quite a passionate entry! congrats on your win. Luv, Andrea

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 7/23/2011 10:55:00 AM

My congratulations on this win in the contest of Michael, nette

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/20/2011 9:53:00 PM

this is awesome, Nette. ONe of the more descriptive ones in the contest!

James Fraser

Date: 7/20/2011 12:59:00 PM

Yep, I have met this red door. Hopefully soon I shall be saying goodbye to this red door. Fine piece Nette, good luck in Michael's contest :) smiles for the Princess :)

Jl Sadberry

Date: 7/20/2011 6:56:00 AM

Ps. Smile, *^_^* “I Just Wished to Drop Back In Again to Say Good Morning & Wish Your Beauty A Very Blessed & Glorious Day My Dear, Nette Onclaud.” === My Love Always to You, Jasper *

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 7/20/2011 6:18:00 AM

I have read your poetry today and in my mind it is an interesting and awesome piece Nette. I will return again soon to read more of your writings. Love, Carol

Kash Poet

Date: 7/19/2011 9:25:00 PM

Yes that mad red door signifies a lot.....wonderful Tetractys here Nette.Love it.Best wishes for the contest.

Jl Sadberry

Date: 7/19/2011 7:58:00 PM

Smile, *^_^* “Love The Double Red Door Signifying Both Sides Attributed Unto Its Colours Heated Emotions = My Dear Precious & Priceless, Talented & Beautiful Nette == I Also Love Your beauties Own Passion Felt Amid Its Short Yet Profound Verse Although *^_^* I Could Do Without Slamming or Amissful Words As I Am Certain, Most of Us Would Much Rather Never Know *^_^* Very Wise & Very Beautiful Painting.” === My Love to You Always, Jasper *