Red Door

warmth behind this red door soft flames touching smiles of lamps and pillows' glowing faces... but fiery words can slam the mad red door anger heating couple’s room knifed words rage
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Brown Avatar
January 4, 2012 at 11:07 AM
Congratulations on making it through the 1st round of PoetrySoup International Contest X 3. Wishing you the best in the finals Nette. Love, Carol
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December 29, 2011 at 2:50 AM
You have a unique way of writing that I enjoy. Congratulations for your 3 entries making it to the final round
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December 29, 2011 at 12:48 AM
Very creative form Nette. How have you been? Congratulations! All of your 3 entries are on the top of the winner's list Lady, wow! I wish to meet you when I retire back home?? (A dream!) HAPPY NEW YEAR! Dalila
Guzzi Avatar
December 28, 2011 at 6:13 PM
Wonderful wins with all 3 congrad's Light & Love
Dietrich Avatar
December 28, 2011 at 5:56 PM
Your GREAT example of Tetractys has captured Soup's attention!! Congrats on getting all three of your poems thru to next round, Nette. I remember when I had three through. It feels great!!
Long Avatar
November 19, 2011 at 2:43 PM
congrats on your poem being featured cory
Brown Avatar
November 16, 2011 at 6:34 AM
Congratulations on being featured this week Nette. Love, Carol
Sweetheart Avatar
November 15, 2011 at 8:24 PM
Congrats Nette luv on featured poem this week on PS.. a wonderful write to share with luv..my friend...soup mail...
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November 15, 2011 at 1:52 PM
Congrats Nette on the featuring of "Red Door." Vince
Austin Avatar
November 14, 2011 at 1:51 PM
The "mad red door." A loaded line here. Warmth doesn't necessarily mean cozy, or pleasant, or loving. I like the idea of warmth can create a border line. Very original stuff, nette. Congrats on the selection. Love, daver
Brown Avatar
July 25, 2011 at 10:06 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win in Michael's "Smiles and Frowns" contest Nette. Love, Carol
Williams Avatar
July 24, 2011 at 10:17 AM
hey Nette, congrats on your win, David
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July 23, 2011 at 11:47 PM
Congratulations on the another win. . .hehehehe . .smile *-* junjun
Sweetheart Avatar
July 23, 2011 at 3:54 PM
Congrats Nette luv on your wonderful win with this entertaining poetry my friend.. commenting is difficult but some seem to be managing ..patience required..luv..
Dietrich Avatar
July 23, 2011 at 11:51 AM
HI, Nette, yours was quite a passionate entry! congrats on your win. Luv, Andrea
Mehta Avatar
July 23, 2011 at 10:55 AM
My congratulations on this win in the contest of Michael, nette
Dietrich Avatar
July 20, 2011 at 9:53 PM
this is awesome, Nette. ONe of the more descriptive ones in the contest!
Fraser Avatar
July 20, 2011 at 12:59 PM
Yep, I have met this red door. Hopefully soon I shall be saying goodbye to this red door. Fine piece Nette, good luck in Michael's contest :) smiles for the Princess :)
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July 20, 2011 at 6:56 AM
Ps. Smile, *^_^* “I Just Wished to Drop Back In Again to Say Good Morning & Wish Your Beauty A Very Blessed & Glorious Day My Dear, Nette Onclaud.” === My Love Always to You, Jasper *
Brown Avatar
July 20, 2011 at 6:18 AM
I have read your poetry today and in my mind it is an interesting and awesome piece Nette. I will return again soon to read more of your writings. Love, Carol
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July 19, 2011 at 9:25 PM
Yes that mad red door signifies a lot.....wonderful Tetractys here Nette.Love it.Best wishes for the contest.
Sadberry Avatar
July 19, 2011 at 7:58 PM
Smile, *^_^* “Love The Double Red Door Signifying Both Sides Attributed Unto Its Colours Heated Emotions = My Dear Precious & Priceless, Talented & Beautiful Nette == I Also Love Your beauties Own Passion Felt Amid Its Short Yet Profound Verse Although *^_^* I Could Do Without Slamming or Amissful Words As I Am Certain, Most of Us Would Much Rather Never Know *^_^* Very Wise & Very Beautiful Painting.” === My Love to You Always, Jasper *
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July 19, 2011 at 7:48 PM
very nice write, I like it, the form is a bit limiting.......best wishes Old Jack
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