Red Dawn

horizon aglow
wandering winds wailing wisps
storm clouds flaming red 

 © Harry J Horsman 2020

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Angela Crabtree

Date: 3/25/2021 9:35:00 PM

Beautiful haiku, Harry :)

Susan Ashley

Date: 9/28/2020 4:42:00 PM

Ah, those mare's tails, beautiful to behold, hint of stormy changes to come. Wonderful alliteration and the atmospheric imagery of your haiku is beautiful, Harry. Love that last line, especially! Warmest wishes, dear poet.. ~Susan

Michael Tor

Date: 9/16/2020 5:33:00 PM

Love the imagery and the perfect words used to create this exceptional piece...

Paul Callus

Date: 9/4/2020 2:29:00 PM

Your lovely haiku attracts by color, movement and alliteration, Harry. Hope this is a winner! Regards // paul

Pashang Salehi

Date: 8/31/2020 1:38:00 PM

Nicely done...

Judy Ball

Date: 8/27/2020 3:38:00 PM

Wonderful Harry. Reminds me of the rhyme<"Red sky in the morning sailor take warning. Red sky at night sailor's delight." Loved this. God Bless, JB

Paghunda Zahid

Date: 8/26/2020 6:30:00 AM

Beautiful Imagery... Well penned. Good luck for the contest.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/25/2020 3:06:00 PM

Now this is FANTASTIC work, Harry.

Robert L. Hinshaw

Date: 8/23/2020 6:56:00 AM

Great entry for the contest, Harry! Here in Colorado with all the fires, both the sun and clouds are red - weird indeed. Take good care and stay safe - Bob

Vijay Pandit

Date: 8/23/2020 5:34:00 AM

Well written Harry--in color and alliteration--apt for the theme.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/23/2020 3:30:00 AM

- Oh, my favorite haiku .... wonderful, Harry :) - I changed a little on my ... the wolf is gone :))) - Best wishes in the contest - Have a wonderful Sunday :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)