Joe Maverick Poet Prose

Red Cloud

Melding thoughts.. A guiding force;
Showed strength through sharing Ways, 
drew spirit, from the great One, following the wind,
finding a hollow,  gliding the currents stringing a bow,
Being close at hand for us, What more was there to know?
amid familiar scents of pines so fresh, taking for our needs enough, 
To sustain the tribes, to be all; all we Ever should Want to know, 
in this knowing to be as one!

© Joe Maverick 23-11-2013

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Pandita Sietesantos June 14, 2015 at 12:46 PM I am glad I came across this one which is such a deep powerful tribute to Native Americans. If you haven't already done so, when you have a minute, please take a look at my piece "A Past Life - The Mayan Warrior Princess." Pandita

Matthew Anish March 15, 2014 at 5:39 PM I found this write quite inspiring! I go to a pow wow in NYC at least once a year. Keep it up! Peace & Blessings Matthew Anish

Andrea Dietrich December 8, 2013 at 3:50 PM Hi, good sir, and I hope your Christmas is coming very brightly along!

Keith Bickerstaffe December 1, 2013 at 7:53 PM Quite the philosopher you are! I'm pretty sure I know where you are with this, and I am in total agreement. BRAVO my friend!! Best wishes, Keith (PS I'll try not to be such a stranger!)

Don Johnson December 1, 2013 at 5:02 AM melded thought of better time, when all did know and drink the wine, and lust for life was all we knew, what the hell is a bludger to do, complicated ..and benign. on ya mate....

Andrea Dietrich November 30, 2013 at 10:18 PM Hey, this was a great idea for that contest. I can see you are getting congrats down here so I am glad you were in that contest. congrats and I really enjoyed this one.

Sara Kendrick November 29, 2013 at 11:17 AM Interesting lines penned..Enjoyed reading today..Sara Sara Kendrick November 29, 2013 at 11:17 AM Way to go..Congrats..Sara

Shanity Rain November 26, 2013 at 3:20 PM Again , a favorite !

Dan Kearley November 26, 2013 at 1:33 AM "To be as one"... I just love that! Great write, Joe... Thank you for the comments on my poem as well. Congrats!

Kelly Deschler November 25, 2013 at 9:32 PM A beautifully written poem, Joe! I really enjoyed the read! Wonderful work! Congratulations on your well deserved win!...Thank you for the kind congrats on my poem. I appreciate it very much!

Poet Destroyer A November 25, 2013 at 9:28 PM Joe, a beautiful and lovely win... Love the embracing wind... . Congratulations on the win... luv~ Linda

Jack Horne November 25, 2013 at 3:37 PM love this one, Joe. Hope you're having a great week : )

Nette Onclaud November 25, 2013 at 12:08 PM sweet cheers to you for a greeat win, joe..: huggs

Monterey Sirak November 25, 2013 at 8:09 AM Congrats on your win. Wonderful poem

Dr.Ram Mehta November 24, 2013 at 10:05 PM Congratulations on this fine win, Joe

Cherl Dunn November 24, 2013 at 8:20 PM Well written and expressed, enjoyed your write, thanks for the congrads on my win. cheri

Shadow Hamilton November 24, 2013 at 5:13 PM lovely Joe congrats on win Shadow x smile hug

Sara Kendrick November 24, 2013 at 4:53 PM Enjoyed reading your contest entry..Congrats on your win..Thanks for stopping by...Sara

Sandra Adams November 24, 2013 at 4:39 PM congrats on your win...

Donna Jones November 24, 2013 at 3:56 PM Much congratulations... well done

Shanity Rain November 24, 2013 at 2:11 PM Thank-you for entering my contest ! You deserved this win ! Joe Maverick November 24, 2013 at 2:42 PM A win..? Already wow I am pleased and surprised Shanity..' thank you very much.!!