Paula Goldsmith Poet Rhyme

Red Beauty

Beauty is your name red apple just for me                          Your fruity and lovely taste lasts in my mouth                      It's my duty to enjoy and chew you well                              My best friend Judy and I will share you                              Your skin of red ruby is pretty for all to see 



Date Written: 11/3/2021

3 Place 

Something Beautiful 5 line rhyme
Contest Judged: 11/11/2021 Sponsored by: charles messina

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Bill Baker November 17, 2021 at 10:43 AM Makes me want to good grab an apple for a morning snack. Thanks for sharing, Bill Paula Goldsmith November 18, 2021 at 12:10 PM Thank You, for your note. It is an honor to have this wonderful win. Glad you this red apple write. An apple makes a great morning snack. Enjoy......Have a great/blessed autumn day......................

Evelyn Judy Buehler November 12, 2021 at 11:29 AM It must be a delicious apple. Your poem is a beauty also, and it is in my faves. :) Paula Goldsmith November 13, 2021 at 7:41 AM Thank You, for your note. It is an honor to have this wonderful win. Glad you like my red apple write. Did I see you put it in my faves??? WOW!!! You just made my day. "Thanks" Have a great/blessed autumn day......................

Charles Messina November 11, 2021 at 2:55 PM Ahh, such a beautifully written and delicious tasting poem, Paula. Love the topic! Congratulations on your win in my contest. Hugs and blessings. ~Charlie Paula Goldsmith November 12, 2021 at 7:59 AM Thank You, for your note and for your congratulations. It is an honor to have this wonderful win in your contest. Glad you like this fun red apple write. Have a blessed autumn day......................

Kim Rodrigues November 7, 2021 at 6:33 PM A pretty friendship Paula Goldsmith November 8, 2021 at 7:52 AM Thanks for your note. Glad you like my write~the apple. Have a blessed autumn day......................

Paulette Calasibetta November 6, 2021 at 7:48 AM Hi Paula, Apples are worth the tribute you have given them here. Lovely! Blessings, Paulette Paula Goldsmith November 8, 2021 at 7:51 AM Thanks for your note. Glad you like my tribute to the apple. This is the best fruit~the apple. Have a blessed autumn day......................

Mystic Rose Rose November 5, 2021 at 3:16 PM I love juice red apples and its fun sharing them too, I like to chop them up in bite size and enjoy with coffee, lol, nicely done my friend :) Paula Goldsmith November 8, 2021 at 7:49 AM Thanks for your note. Glad you like this fun write. This is the best time of the year for fresh apples. Have a blessed autumn day......................

Vijay Pandit November 5, 2021 at 2:58 PM Enjoyed this ode to apple--lovely write, Paula. Paula Goldsmith November 8, 2021 at 7:47 AM Thanks for your note. Glad you like this Red Beauty write. Yes, to the wonderful apples. Have a blessed autumn day......................

Judy Ball November 5, 2021 at 1:36 PM Apples have always been my favorite fruit. Love them. Good stuff here. God Bless, JB Paula Goldsmith November 8, 2021 at 7:45 AM Thanks for your note. Glad you like this write. I also love apples fresh and cooked. Like pie and muffins. Have a blessed autumn day......................

M. L. Kiser November 3, 2021 at 2:17 PM You're making me want an apple; a fun read. Paula Goldsmith November 4, 2021 at 3:18 PM Thanks for your note. Glad you like my fun apple write. I wanted an apple after I wrote it. Have a blessed autumn day......................