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Red Beauty

Beauty is your name red apple just for me Your fruity and lovely taste lasts in my mouth It's my duty to enjoy and chew you well My best friend Judy and I will share you Your skin of red ruby is pretty for all to see Date Written: 11/3/2021 3 Place Something Beautiful 5 line rhyme Contest Judged: 11/11/2021 Sponsored by: charles messina

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Bill Baker

Date: 11/17/2021 10:43:00 AM

Makes me want to good grab an apple for a morning snack. Thanks for sharing, Bill

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 11/18/2021 12:10:00 PM

Thank You, for your note. It is an honor to have this wonderful win. Glad you this red apple write. An apple makes a great morning snack. Enjoy......Have a great/blessed autumn day......................

Evelyn Judy Buehler

Date: 11/12/2021 11:29:00 AM

It must be a delicious apple. Your poem is a beauty also, and it is in my faves. :)

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 11/13/2021 7:41:00 AM

Thank You, for your note. It is an honor to have this wonderful win. Glad you like my red apple write. Did I see you put it in my faves??? WOW!!! You just made my day. "Thanks" Have a great/blessed autumn day......................

Charles Messina

Date: 11/11/2021 2:55:00 PM

Ahh, such a beautifully written and delicious tasting poem, Paula. Love the topic! Congratulations on your win in my contest. Hugs and blessings. ~Charlie

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 11/12/2021 7:59:00 AM

Thank You, for your note and for your congratulations. It is an honor to have this wonderful win in your contest. Glad you like this fun red apple write. Have a blessed autumn day......................

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 11/7/2021 6:33:00 PM

A pretty friendship

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 11/8/2021 7:52:00 AM

Thanks for your note. Glad you like my write~the apple. Have a blessed autumn day......................

Paulette Calasibetta

Date: 11/6/2021 7:48:00 AM

Hi Paula, Apples are worth the tribute you have given them here. Lovely! Blessings, Paulette

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 11/8/2021 7:51:00 AM

Thanks for your note. Glad you like my tribute to the apple. This is the best fruit~the apple. Have a blessed autumn day......................

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 11/5/2021 3:16:00 PM

I love juice red apples and its fun sharing them too, I like to chop them up in bite size and enjoy with coffee, lol, nicely done my friend :)

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 11/8/2021 7:49:00 AM

Thanks for your note. Glad you like this fun write. This is the best time of the year for fresh apples. Have a blessed autumn day......................

Vijay Pandit

Date: 11/5/2021 2:58:00 PM

Enjoyed this ode to apple--lovely write, Paula.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 11/8/2021 7:47:00 AM

Thanks for your note. Glad you like this Red Beauty write. Yes, to the wonderful apples. Have a blessed autumn day......................

Judy Ball

Date: 11/5/2021 1:36:00 PM

Apples have always been my favorite fruit. Love them. Good stuff here. God Bless, JB

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 11/8/2021 7:45:00 AM

Thanks for your note. Glad you like this write. I also love apples fresh and cooked. Like pie and muffins. Have a blessed autumn day......................

M. L. Kiser

Date: 11/3/2021 2:17:00 PM

You're making me want an apple; a fun read.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 11/4/2021 3:18:00 PM

Thanks for your note. Glad you like my fun apple write. I wanted an apple after I wrote it. Have a blessed autumn day......................