Red Barn Reminders

It rests in peace on the old farmer’s land

A sizeable wood frame with a silo


The late farmer and his hard-working wife

Lay ‘neath tattered crosses near the barn door


Members of the Greatest Generation

Rarely visited by their grandchildren


But, oh, that barn held animals and hay

A buggy that was mounted to a horse


Taking their clan to the Lord’s house Sundays

Still sits within the red barn’s pine board walls


Reminders of a time not so long past

When the work ethic was exemplified


Viewers see it now, wonder who lived there

Farms with old red barns succumb to decay



*For Rick’s “Red Barn” Contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Brown Avatar
December 13, 2010 at 10:23 AM
Congratulations on your win Carolyn in Rick's contest. Love, Carol
Mannan Avatar
December 12, 2010 at 9:12 PM
Many congratulations for this super write and win.
Crisci Avatar
December 12, 2010 at 10:10 AM
Heartfelt Congratulations on your win in Rick's contest. Your poem tells a beautiful story of a barn in decay and completely forgotten. It's a very moving poem taking one down memory lane. Thanks for your appreciative comments. I wish you continued success in your writing endeavors. Have a wonderful Sunday. Peace and Love, Andrew.
Fraser Avatar
December 12, 2010 at 6:42 AM
Congratulations Carolyn on your win in Rick's fine contest. Who would have thought reading about and old red barn would picture so many images of the past. Is'nt the mind wonderful. Have a lovely Sunday >> James :)
Roberts Avatar
December 11, 2010 at 7:14 PM
wonderful entry , congrats on your win in the contest Carolyn
Dillard Avatar
December 11, 2010 at 6:17 PM
Congratulations on this very nice production. I was glad to see your name among the winners. RAY
Dietrich Avatar
December 11, 2010 at 4:46 PM
A nostalgic piece with the cold cruel bite of reality. GrEAT job, Carolyn. And congrats on your fine win. LUv, Andrea
Freeman Avatar
December 11, 2010 at 9:48 AM
Lay ‘neath tattered crosses near the barn door. That line is so full of the precept Agape Carolyn, that it brought tears to my eyes. Congratulations on an excellent presentation, dear friend. Agape, Moses
Mehta Avatar
December 11, 2010 at 4:55 AM
Congratulations on this well deserved win in the contest of Red Barn
Horsman Avatar
December 10, 2010 at 11:33 PM
wonderful, and so profound, congrats on your win in the contest. Harry
Duffin Avatar
November 1, 2010 at 1:36 PM
Thanks Carolyn for your help. It brought me to your site and this sad piece. Funny how as you get older there are more things that we have forgot but also more in that hidden store that only needs poignant words like those as a key. My Grandmother was involved in amateur dramatics and I was the the body in,'Murder at the red barn'. Thanks for that key. Eamon
Chappell Avatar
October 29, 2010 at 4:12 AM
you know how to write so well my friend duncan
Gibbons Avatar
October 13, 2010 at 7:52 AM
Dear Carolyn, such a nostalgic and sad comparison, what was once is no more. Thanks Jim Gibbons
Dietrich Avatar
October 11, 2010 at 10:13 PM
Reminds me of my own grandparents' farm house which is now completely different since they died. Good one. LUv, Andrea
Richards Avatar
October 11, 2010 at 5:42 PM
Such a lovely truth in this nostalgic poem, Carolyn. Makes one feel as if the old barn was flesh and bone. Nice!! :)
Knop Avatar
October 10, 2010 at 6:02 AM
Hi Carolyn, I enjoyed reading your Couplet. Isn't it a pity that so much is prone for decy nowadays? When I am walking around the city here, there are too many old and nice buildings falling slowly apart and no one cares. That is really painful. Wish you best of luck for Rick's contest!...Love, Gert
Christian Avatar
October 9, 2010 at 11:22 PM
thanks for your kind coments on my poem happy birthday dad and lifted up, the Lord is keeping me and my kids safe, although we suffered the brunt of verbal abuse and threats of death the Lord removed my husband before anything came to that, ans its sad but so amazing how God's Grace is so awesome, like the song amazing Grace he did save a wretch like me he is so faithful and true and no words can express the gratitude in my heart that not a single hair on our head was touchd. Amen
Neels Avatar
October 9, 2010 at 2:42 PM
Carolyn your imagery in this one is amazing and a little nostalgic as well. Wishing all the best with this gem for the contest. Love Wilma
Loving Iii Avatar
October 9, 2010 at 7:50 AM
we had a barn. a farm with animals. i slopped the hogs. hitched up the horses to the wagon. all the thing people my age never got to do. it was'nt a big farm but we had harvest. back breaking work in the sun. and the fun with my childhood cousins. thank you for the reminder. love john
Austin Avatar
October 9, 2010 at 6:54 AM
Good write. I see the scene vividly and it reminds me of so much that I miss. Love, Dave
Anish Avatar
October 8, 2010 at 7:50 PM
Everything eventually succumbs to decay. What is the trick for escaping that? Your poem is remininscent of rural America. Were you writing about your forebears? Love Matthew Anish
Locksley Avatar
October 8, 2010 at 7:13 PM
You have created two characters (and their family) who endured the Depression with faith and hard work. Guess that's why they were the "Greatest Generation." Wonder what our generation will be known as.
Peranteau Avatar
October 8, 2010 at 3:35 PM
Wow Carolyn; seriously, you have jolted an epic moment in my life dear poet....I know it's been said before...but here it goes any ways....been there; done that ! Great write ! much love, james
Freeman Avatar
October 8, 2010 at 11:08 AM
Beautiful story and poem Carolyn. You've driven exactly the same miles in one day which was the limit that I use to set for myself each day. When I drove over the road in my eighteen wheeler. Smile. Rest easy and let the sand man do his job for about 8 hours, then do it again. Stay in touch. Agape, Moses
Sapp Avatar
October 7, 2010 at 6:20 PM
Beautifully done Carolyn! I wonder if there is anyone who can't find a picture like this in their memory. They were better times than the ones we live in! Wayne
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