Red Petals of Everlasting Love

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Red Petals Of Everlasting Love Perfect couples united in a Holy Matrimony Entwined by God in His most divine harmony They built a home in the fortress of true love A salubrious place, their most comforting cove. Lulling over a lake of serenity from the start Sustained by faith and fidelity deep in the heart. For being steadfast in love, in their conviction Over the years, no squalls razed their foundation Relentlessly, they look forward for future boons. Blessed now they are with lovely and talented children In their sacrifices and patience, dreams will be on hand Nurtured kids by their great mother and father God loving and fearing ones, blessings to all others. Red petals of everlasting love rain from the sky Outpouring over these two hearts’ boundless tie Matrimonial bond - an oath to God forever Eternal amorous affinity they’ll never surrender Lifetime creases their body, it doesn’t matter. ©2016Leonora Galinta All Rights Reserved Feb. 14, 2016 6.05 pm. -Sharing a a poem as my Valentines gift to couples (my cousin and his wife).. An earnest request giving me the title, “ Everlasting Love” but I added words on the title.

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Tim Smith

Date: 2/14/2016 12:37:00 PM

So So beautiful Leonora...The image of red petals of everlasting love is divine. I read your comment on Jan's poem and I think you would be a great mom. Your love and generosity just pours out of your poetry and as a parent those are the most important qualities that you need.

Len Gasun
Date: 2/19/2016 7:34:00 AM

Thank you so much my dear friend, Tim!

Robert Lindley

Date: 2/14/2016 10:55:00 AM

A romantic and well written poem on love and affairs of the heart my friend. Great verses, my fav one is--- "Red petals of everlasting love rain from the sky"...A7

Len Gasun
Date: 2/19/2016 7:33:00 AM

Thank you so much my dear friend, Rober!

Paul Callus

Date: 2/14/2016 9:17:00 AM

What a lovely acrostic, Leonora! Their wait has not been in vain...you came out with something that they will treasure for a lifetime! The first and end stanzas are my fav parts. ~ Take care and hugs // paul

Len Gasun
Date: 2/14/2016 9:21:00 AM

Thank you so much my dear friend, Paul especially for your approval. It means a lot to me for them. Many hugs back at you. God bless!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 2/14/2016 8:01:00 AM

- Truly beautiful words to bring at the "journey of life" dear friend Leonora - A gift that really means a lot, because you've written them personally - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Len Gasun
Date: 2/14/2016 8:39:00 AM

Thank you so much my dear friend Anne Lise. Your feedback means a lot to me. I hope they will like it my dear friend. They've been asking me to write in a year forgotten, then they reminded me last New Year's Eve then this morning:)))