Red

Red

Red rag to a bull. It’s funny how
That makes me smile inside: I think of
Your hair and how it entrances me.
Red hair; and me, stamping and snorting inside
As those shiny waves sway and swirl, heavy,
Chestnut hued and red, red.

But you are no daughter, prattling child nor
Reluctant pupil, to hang on every word and quip
And feed my misconceiving ego.
Oh no! A red rag all right, challenging the
Misconceptions and preconceptions, by which I 
Habitually order my inner world.

Yet in the soft light of evening, arabesques frame 
your face, elfin and mischevious; a beauty,
A feminine Puck indeed.
A woman in the outward form of elf or fiend:
(That’s my red rag to you!) but a woman all
in all and so delightful to me.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

Poem

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

A  Avatar
September 19, 2015 at 4:45 PM
Edward, awesome metaphors. I like the attraction here. I like the flow and the theme. Great write. LUV **SKAT**
Clapham Avatar
September 20, 2015 at 6:06 AM
Thanks Skat...written a while ago but I still remember the evening with the swaying and swirling hair!!!!!!
Breidenthal Avatar
July 30, 2015 at 4:16 AM
Absolutely stunning poetry, Edward. This is fantastic. "Oh no! A red rag all right, challenging the Misconceptions and preconceptions, by which I Habitually order my inner world." LOVE that! Always, Laura
Get a Premium Membership
Turn off ads, get more exposure for your poetry, and get more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Diverse Voices: The Poetry of Human Rights and the Pursuit of Peace