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You were a flavour Sweet, Then sour, Then bitter. Soft at first, the stolen looks, slow but wide And the red and white. The peppermint green, the saccharine Of your eyes as your lips peppered my world with sweetness - My rosy lips that touched the decadent crimson glow Grasped in the palm of my white knuckle hand The steady verdant gaze of my love, not yet a stranger. - And I bite, no longer red and white No true love’s sweet kiss I do not know that anymore Wrapped up tight in a facade Foil and a ribbon A pretty little prison. - Unravel me in your poisonous kiss, Lifeblood is fading Will not I scream Enveloped by an inescapable dream This cannot be living - There is nothing more of me to take I have been devoured If I am to be nothing Let me be yours Just red

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Date: 2/13/2024 7:13:00 AM
Welcome Alana to PS! What a captivating, visceral journey through a dark, twisted love affair. The use of color strikes a chord, starting with innocence and descending into the suffocating of the bitter end. The shift brilliantly contrasts the false appearance of happiness with the trapped reality. The ending, is both chilling and heartbreaking, summing up the complete loss of self within this destructive love. Your poem is beautifully crafted and emotionally raw. - Blessings, Daniel
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Date: 11/21/2023 6:00:00 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Welcome to Poetry Soup. I welcome you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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Date: 11/19/2023 5:40:00 PM
When one is hopelessly devoured by love. In love and angst. Engaging if heart breaking.
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Date: 11/19/2023 4:06:00 PM
Red it is. Passionate plea
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