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red pine needles carpeting the forest floor AP: 2nd place 2020 Posted on September 9, 2019

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Caren Krutsinger

Date: 9/10/2019 2:54:00 AM

I want to see them, Line. I wish I could.

Line Gauthier
Date: 9/10/2019 7:40:00 AM

Hop on a train or a bus or pack your RV, Caren. Waiting for you.

John Lawless

Date: 9/9/2019 6:57:00 PM

very nice Line, mother nature unfolding her quilts....

Line Gauthier
Date: 9/9/2019 7:36:00 PM

Absolutely, John. I can't hear the word quilt without thinking of my grand-mother. Thanks for that.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/9/2019 5:47:00 PM

awesome one!

Line Gauthier
Date: 9/9/2019 7:36:00 PM

Thanks, Andrea. Much appreciated.

Timothy Mcguire

Date: 9/9/2019 4:02:00 PM

This poem brought back to mind a forest of evergreens that is near me. When you walk among them your footsteps are silent because of the red carpet under your feet. Great haiku!

Line Gauthier
Date: 9/9/2019 7:37:00 PM

That's lovely. Thank you so much for the lovely imagery, Timothy.

Arturo Michael

Date: 9/9/2019 1:45:00 PM

Nice imagery...I can see and even smell it...

Line Gauthier
Date: 9/9/2019 3:39:00 PM

Thanks, Arturo. Much appreciated.