Red - Once Upon a Time

I never thought I was a princess
   only a child of the forest wild.

Arriving unexpected, 
    despite the hints along the way,
    to  mother's chagrin, we never quite connected.
    I was quite the surprise on my birthday.

She wrapped me in a bright red blanket
    and there I was unwanted and very much alive,
    warm,  tightly wrapped safely in a bundle,
    left on my grandmother's doorstep to thrive
    learning to be most grateful and humble.

That old, kind woman, took me in and recognized my face
    knowing well the secret of my birth and place
    surmising the very source from where I came
    and as I grew, she knew, the Red would become my name.

My story was a secret that no one should ever be told
   but children share their secrets from the fold.
   A strange young boy who ran with wolves beyond the wood
   had often met and played with little Red riding hood.

They spent their time together after school
   and spoke of the world and all its silly rules
   but they were not meant to be a part of it,
   the boy and Red were  more simple spirits.

When grandma died having given Red all she could teach her,
  it was said villagers saw two strange and wolf like creatures
  who came and took the most precious things away
  and Red riding hood disappeared that very day.

The red blanket still hangs upon a line
   and in the window of that forest lost in time,
   some say they see, a wolf boy and young girl that run
   laughing and playing in the morning sun.



2/2/16

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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Date: 2/10/2016 11:38:00 AM
Glad it was a fun write.... your reply is nice
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Date: 2/10/2016 11:35:00 AM
Thank you all for reading, it was a fun write. DMB
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Date: 2/7/2016 10:54:00 PM
Love your story!!! Congratulations on your win Hugs Eve
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Date: 2/7/2016 4:22:00 PM
Reading that was fun! Peace and many blessings to you.
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Date: 2/6/2016 4:23:00 PM
DM, Congratulations on your wonderful "Once Upon A Time Win!!!" Luv ~LINDA~
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Date: 2/10/2016 11:36:00 AM
TY, it was a fun write.
Date: 2/6/2016 11:53:00 AM
DM, congrats on your placement and thank you for being a part of my contest :)-luloo *Smiles*
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Date: 2/10/2016 11:37:00 AM
TY, truly enjoyable.
Date: 2/6/2016 11:12:00 AM
A very sad tale indeed DM congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 2/10/2016 11:37:00 AM
So many sad tales, but eventually (I guess) we all grow up. TY for reading. DMB
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