Red-Winged Blackbird

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Red-winged Blackbird

Look! There in the bulrushes,
Perched at an angle
To the reed,
Is the Red-winged Blackbird,
Keeping a close watch
In his territory.

How do I know it’s a “he”? Easy.
By the jet black plumage
And red, yellow epaulettes
That distinguish him from a “she”.
The female’s feathers are rustic colours
With white patches underneath
And white streaks on the back and wings,
That blend in with the surroundings.

See! I spot her sitting in the nest,
All snuggled in
Keeping her eggs warm.
Quiet,—not moving;
Not wanting anyone
To know where she is.

Listen! And hear his three syllable
‘Oh-ka-leee’cry piercing the air,
Can only mean one thing to his mate;
Love! And he will be there for her.

Slowly, I back away
Not wanting to create
A disturbance,
Or cause undue stress;
For the birds.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018



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Date: 12/16/2018 2:27:00 PM
One of the earliest birds I made a favorite as boy and which were plentiful in my rural neighborhood. The other bird, the Blue Bird, has long since disappeared. Some ornithologists believe it is extinct? I hope not. Thanks for the post. / M
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Dennis Spilchuk
Date: 12/18/2018 10:58:00 AM
It is quite the bird & fun to watch. The 'Blue Bird' isn't native where I live. I read that in the early 1900s it almost went extinct due to habitat breeding destruction, & then their numbers were decimated in the 1970s due to competition with other birds introduced into their habitat. Their numbers are rebounding back due to the efforts of volunteer bird loves.
Date: 5/22/2018 7:39:00 AM
Enjoyed! Birder two thumbs up :) xomo!
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Date: 7/7/2018 9:46:00 AM
Thank you.
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