Red-Splattered Existence
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The syllable counter and I disagree on the words “fire” and “hour.” I believe them each to contain 2 syllables but the syllable counter says one. I believe this Haiku follows the “5-7-5” pattern as required.
pain, red fireworks
exploding, burning, searing —
hours, days, months, years.
July 12, 2019
Copyright © Cindi Rockwell | Year Posted 2019
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