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Red-Dress-Fabulous Goodbye

Oh no!  What are YOU doing here?
I haven’t seen you in a year!   
But I’m sure it’s perfectly clear,
I’m still red-dress fabulous, Dear!

You thought you could steal my spotlight?
You sauntered in like it’s your right.
But now you know, it's no fair fight—
I’m red-dress fabulous, tonight! 

Surely you see, it’s my parade!
You’ve been upstaged.  You’ve been out played!
And now your welcome’s been overstayed,
there in my red-dress-fabulous shade!

It's getting late and you should fly-
I bid you, red-dress-fabulous Good-bye!


January 15, 2019

Poem of the Day ~ January 17, 2019

Copyright © P.S. Awtry | Year Posted 2019

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Line Gauthier Date: 2/11/2019 10:45:00 PM Lovely, PS. Congrats on your win. What a fun poem. Login to Reply P.S. Awtry Date: 2/12/2019 12:07:00 AM thank you, Line. I am so glad you liked it. (soupmail) :)

Geoffrey Brewer Date: 2/3/2019 3:24:00 PM Miaow! A fabulous, feline, well-founded counterblast. Beautifully done, P.S. Login to Reply P.S. Awtry Date: 2/3/2019 4:46:00 PM Thank you, Geoffrey for your encouraging comments :)

Michael Wise Date: 1/30/2019 3:28:00 PM How clever! Loved the rhyme, and the flow, and the wording was terrific! :) Login to Reply P.S. Awtry Date: 1/30/2019 4:30:00 PM Thank you. This was a lot of fun for me to write :)

Gershon Wolf Date: 1/19/2019 9:10:00 PM Unique and incredible ink. Didn't realize it was POTD --- so congrats are in order! Best wishes, Gershon Login to Reply P.S. Awtry Date: 1/19/2019 9:33:00 PM Thank you! So glad you liked it :)

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 1/18/2019 4:32:00 AM - Congratulations with this beautiful poem, P.S. :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Login to Reply P.S. Awtry Date: 1/18/2019 8:56:00 AM I'm glad you liked it. Thank you :)

Brandy Nicole Date: 1/17/2019 10:15:00 PM Red-dress fabulous with an attitude!!! :) I love it. Your thoughts bring a smile. Congratulations P.S. on Poem of the Day. ~ Brandy Login to Reply P.S. Awtry Date: 1/17/2019 10:23:00 PM I am glad you liked it. Thank you, Brandy :)

Eve Roper Date: 1/17/2019 9:24:00 PM P.S., congratulations on POTD. Hugs Eve Login to Reply P.S. Awtry Date: 1/17/2019 10:23:00 PM Thank you, Eve :)

Charles Messina Date: 1/17/2019 2:03:00 PM This is awesome, P.S. Congratulations on POTD honors...Well deserved! Login to Reply P.S. Awtry Date: 1/17/2019 2:04:00 PM Thank you so much :)

Connie Marcum Wong Date: 1/17/2019 1:42:00 PM Yay! I am so happy to see this poem being honored with POTD! As you already know, I adored and Faved it. Congratulations on this deserving honor! xxoo : ) Login to Reply P.S. Awtry Date: 1/17/2019 1:46:00 PM thank you so much Connie :) XXX

Winged Warrior Date: 1/17/2019 11:52:00 AM Lady in a red dress...now that's poetic lol...Congrats!!! on POTD! P.S...love & light...^WW^ Login to Reply P.S. Awtry Date: 1/17/2019 1:32:00 PM Thank you :)

Daniel Turner Date: 1/17/2019 10:25:00 AM Congratulations on POTD honors PS. I think I saw it down at the Goodwill Store. LOL a fun read. Login to Reply P.S. Awtry Date: 1/17/2019 2:03:00 PM thx :)

Susan Jeavons Date: 1/17/2019 9:53:00 AM Fabulous poem! Loved the playfulness and the rhyme. Congrats! Login to Reply P.S. Awtry Date: 1/17/2019 1:31:00 PM Thank you, Susan. I'm glad you liked it :)

Mike Gentile Date: 1/17/2019 7:55:00 AM Love this P.S, Congrats on your POTD !!! Login to Reply P.S. Awtry Date: 1/17/2019 8:49:00 AM I am glad you liked it! Thank you :)

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart Date: 1/17/2019 7:54:00 AM Yay! Back with POTD congratulations! :))) Have a super day P.S. xomo! Login to Reply P.S. Awtry Date: 1/17/2019 8:48:00 AM Thank you! this is a nice way to start the day :)

Heidi Sands Date: 1/17/2019 7:51:00 AM Congratulations for POTD ! :) Login to Reply P.S. Awtry Date: 1/17/2019 8:48:00 AM Thank you, Heidi :)

Chris Green Date: 1/17/2019 7:21:00 AM Congratulations my friend. What a wonderful choice for POTD Login to Reply P.S. Awtry Date: 1/17/2019 8:47:00 AM thank you Chris :)

Vijay Pandit Date: 1/17/2019 6:56:00 AM Back with congrats on poem of the day. Login to Reply P.S. Awtry Date: 1/17/2019 8:46:00 AM thank you, Vijay :)

Charlie Smith Date: 1/17/2019 6:46:00 AM Red dress and those “Betty Davis eyes”, congratulations P.S. on your honor... Login to Reply P.S. Awtry Date: 1/17/2019 8:46:00 AM I adore her! Yes! You have gifted me with the idea of The Diva Davis saying these words! Thank you! :)

Joseph May Date: 1/17/2019 6:43:00 AM Lovely write..Congrats on POTD.. Login to Reply P.S. Awtry Date: 1/17/2019 8:36:00 AM I am glad you liked it! Thank you!

John Lawless Date: 1/17/2019 6:23:00 AM ...not a mention of the red stiletto heels...oh the poor understudy gets little credit for their supporting role...Nicely done Login to Reply P.S. Awtry Date: 1/17/2019 8:36:00 AM Yes, those stilettos deserve a poem all their own! Thank you for your witty comment and compliment :)

John Gondolf Date: 1/17/2019 6:08:00 AM Sounds like everything is red-dress-fabulous under control, PS, congrats on POTD. John Login to Reply P.S. Awtry Date: 1/17/2019 8:24:00 AM thank you so much John. :)

Bobby May Date: 1/17/2019 5:02:00 AM Loved this one P.S. Congratulations on POTD Login to Reply P.S. Awtry Date: 1/17/2019 8:23:00 AM I'm glad you liked it and thank you :)

Wren Rushing Date: 1/17/2019 4:00:00 AM Congratulations P.S. on POTD, enjoy the honors my friend! Login to Reply P.S. Awtry Date: 1/17/2019 8:19:00 AM Thank you, Wren!

Tom Cunningham Date: 1/17/2019 2:25:00 AM Well that got rid of the opposition P.S. Congrats on POTD. Tom. Login to Reply P.S. Awtry Date: 1/17/2019 8:17:00 AM Thank you, Tom :)

Janice Canerdy Date: 1/16/2019 11:43:00 AM Love this well-written, sassy piece, P.S.! Janice Login to Reply P.S. Awtry Date: 1/16/2019 11:48:00 AM Thank you so much, Janice. Glad you liked it! :)

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