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Recovery From Subjective Sight

Old adage: What goes around comes around Recovery from Subjective Sight Subjective eyesight sees a narrow way No stoic smile for the inner child's face Headlong into a righteous angst delay- Humility on trial with biased grace. Peering into mansions of another soul, Reminds ego explore all new labyrinths, Savor truth hidden in rhythmic rhymes’ role Let words escape harsh judgements damning breath. Grace restrains words dogged to throw verbal stones Mercy’s lens delights in effort’s labor Refreshes eyes enchantment for heart zones Finds the unique original to savor. Releases judgement of poet premonitions Removes cataracts – compassion’s mission 5-12-21 Contest; Judge Not Lest You Be Judged Sponsor: John Lawless

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Date: 5/13/2021 1:07:00 PM
Thoughtfully-written, Sam, with fine choices of words. Best wishes in the contest.
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Date: 5/13/2021 12:54:00 PM
I am certainly not surprised! Very Well done, my friend. Blessings and regards
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Date: 5/13/2021 12:29:00 PM
very compassionate indeed!! Well done.
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 5/29/2021 2:08:00 PM
Thank you Andrea! Haven't judged a soup contest yet, but have judged vocal competitions and given workshops on writing poetry and lyrics. Those experiences were great eye openers - great mirrors of humility, walking in another artist's sandals and encouraging a desire to learn from other talented artists! Blessings.

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