Recovering From Life

Recovering From Life

Life, when full of sadness, can break a person’s spirit.
It happens all too often; you can see it in their eyes.
Children bullied around, whipped; why, they know not.
Women, beaten, ridiculed, and abused by husbands/lovers.
Men disrespected, disregarded, and left out.

Perhaps never fully recovered, they choose a solitary life.
Love passes by while hope slips through the cracks.
Who experiences such pains?  

Depressed, by the ramblings of the mind…remembering.
Regressed into defeat, licking the wounds life has thrown.
Dreaming away each day in fantasy…avoiding aches.
Until reality, a distant plea calling to the heart is unheard.
And there one stands, the mind whirling, with no answers.

Perhaps never fully recovered, they choose a solitary life.
Love passes by while hope slips through the cracks.
Does the world give such pains?  

Some people live with their angry hate bestowed.
Thriving in the get things and get it now world.  
Others, roam through the days with grave responsibilities.
And when overwhelmed, lives void of help or praise,
Escape, living withdrawn in a superficial world—
…Fake smiles.

Peace is not only found in a solitary life
Where love passes and hopes slips through the cracks.
God can heal the pains!  (He healed mine.)

We must all do our part:
Thoughtlessness abounds; notice and change.
Selfishness thrives in the get things world; share!
Hurt happens; be not oblivious; show compassion.
Minds might feel wrenched; speak kind words.
… Good deeds.

One forgotten smile that could have been—
One last hope that a stranger seeks—
One kindness, a gesture or word—
…Show love to another.

Sometimes, death yields to eternity before life is finished.  
Unaware that omitted kindnesses might have made
…A difference.  Be kind.  Uplift the self-loathing.
Through prayer, mankind can recover from mortality.
Call upon the Lord, have faith and grow to perfection.
One act of love at a time—

© © Dane Smith-Johnsen
March 14, 2010
Poetic form:  Free Verse
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010


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Date: 4/17/2010 3:55:00 PM
Wise words in this writing. Congratulations. Love, Joyce
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Date: 4/13/2010 4:27:00 PM
Congrats Dane Ann on your HM in Laura's contest.. a wonderful write and honor for u to so enjoy in your special victory... see u in the winners circle..luv.. Linda-Marie..
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Date: 3/14/2010 8:53:00 AM
Very thought provoking write Dane! Without realizing it people help create the monsters that are in the world. By leaving their brothers out and separating them from their company. A soul shun by humanity will soon turn to the creation of their mind for comfort, for it seems that being something, even if it is evil is better than being nothing at all.Smile! You were cool on your comment on "Nano Uno" Thanks, Agape, Moses
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Date: 3/14/2010 8:38:00 AM
You give us much to ponder, dear friend, and I believe you hav given us much insight into how to change our lives for the better. Living a "solitary life" has not brought happiness to me. I can grow spiritually be remembering your message. God bless you for sharing this uplifting poem, Dane Ann. Love you, Carolyn
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Date: 3/14/2010 8:33:00 AM
This is so excellent, Dane Ann, and so meaningful with a message that is a reminder to each one, what a difference we can make with kindness. A winner!! Love, Carrie
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