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Recollections From the Golden Cree Iii

Brackish-gurgling days that
Unobtrusively slid along
Past tussock grass and curled up 
Balls of Fern...
Glued tightly onto structured vanes
Of outstretched frond.
Venerable Mosses reciting epic tales,
Measured throughout Metronomical 
Strains,
Chanting methodically in harmonious
Downturn - 
Wherein contained: 
Foreboding dialects delivered in a 
Forgotten Gaelic tongue,
Magical incantations sung in unison -
Agelessly embedded within the soothing 
Refrains...
Of the ambling rivers enchantments 
And mysterious, pedantic song.

Myths born from legends patiently 
Abiding
Inside secretive, rocky haunts of the
Pebble-strewn burn;
Here, on silvered nights, proud 
And ragged banners
Can sometimes be glimpsed
Fluttering briefly beneath the deep
Currents involuted churn;
Fleeting visitations occasionally 
Manifesting...
Waiting...waiting...waiting
For the wailing of the pipes -
That unreleashed souls should so
Fervently discern!
When the rattling of the Broadsword, 
Picked up by the Clan Chiefs,
Hails the long promised,
Bonnie Pretenders overdue return.

Morning rose, fell, and harshly broke 
Upon Corserine
And her barren uppermost slope
Of littered shale and loosening scree...
"Aye, an dae ye no ken fram yon Trools
Forested glen" -
Over where the black spokes 
Of the Raven wheels as he croaks -
"The gradual swelling sounds permeating
Down,
From high-upper grounds,
Of awakening good Ayrshire folks".

The Glasgow South-Western line yawns 
And reclines
As slowly, but surely, it prepares to
Climb
Past ranked files of stiff Spruce
And Evergreen Pines.
The engineer meets the foot of the hill,
When in concentration of predetermined
Course -
Her engine an irresistible
Nature of unyielding force -
Cast metals and flying pistons 
Combine
Into magnificent hurtling and streamlined
Design -
As she pours over the summit and down
The decline -
With whistle shrieking triumphant and 
Shrill!

Dark lignite piled in the grimy stack
Torn from the dark earths hidden seams;
And darkly brooding the land surrounding 
Acidic lochs 
That hallows the boilers high pitched
Screams.
Oh those heady days of rail and steam
Where I am left to wonder...
The rollicking carriages reverberating
Across my thoughts -
Like driving hail and rolling thunder!

For still scowls sullen Dornal
Upon whose western banks 
A Lairds lordly halls were built;
And ghosts abroad: Wandering spirits
Of five damned covenanters -
Whose thick red blood the indifferent 
Muskets spilt!
Drumlamford House, namesake of the 
loch,
Whose laid Quoin coincides 
Upon the coronation of an empires
Greatest queen...
"Sleep ye peacefully beneath darkest 
Meteorite-streaked Skies" -
Arisen...To rollicking white horses 
Lustily disporting -
Admidst joyous flashes of the playful 
Waves evasive gleam!


THESE ARE THE HAPPIEST DAYS OF MY CHILDHOOD. 
TWENTY MILES OF BEAUTIFUL UNSPOILED RIVER TO ROAM AND FISH
IN THE LOWLANDS OF SCOTLAND:- THE RIVER CREE!

TO BE CONTINUED...   :)

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 8/24/2017 11:29:00 AM
I love every inch! I am most at home reading this and the other two remembrances. My heart longs to be there. So well described that if I looked out my door perhaps....
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John Fleming
Date: 8/25/2017 12:41:00 PM
Hi, Patricia. I was very lucky as a boy, my father was an avid Fly-Fisherman and took me fishing with him everywhere he went...I miss those days so very, very much. I need to edit this write quite a lot and reformat it a tad; there will also be more verses added one day in the not to far future. My very warmest regards, Patricia! :) john P.s The beautiful Cree river still rolls along down through the beautiful surrounding moorland. :)
Date: 6/5/2016 8:57:00 AM
I've enjoyed following your wonderful childhood journey John. It could have been written as a description of a beautiful painting.
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John Fleming
Date: 6/6/2016 11:00:00 AM
James, you are right, It was a wonderful childhood...as far as the fishing was concerned. It is so very refreshing to know that someone, like yourself, has read through the whole poem without reading it piecemeal; I am most grateful for this, James. Please feel free to visit at anytime...You are always very welcome here. Many, many thanks! My very best regards...And warmest wishes. :) john
Date: 3/20/2016 2:38:00 PM
Just wonderful in content John, experiement with the line & verse length. Light & Love
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Date: 3/23/2016 10:49:00 AM
Hi, Debbie. Thanks for the visit and constructive comments - I will take them on board! Many thanks, Debbie. My very best regards! :) john
Date: 3/18/2016 8:41:00 PM
Hey, now I know this River Cree... It is not some graphic artwork from Marvel comic fantasy.. Beautifully engineering of choice words.. 3 parts of supreme mastery with words.. Congratulations and tq for sharing...
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Date: 3/19/2016 7:56:00 AM
Indeed yes - the river Cree is a real river! A beautiful stretch of water running through the varied and scenic South Ayrshire countryside of Dumfries and Galloway. It passes through a small town called Newton Stewart, reaching its mouth at the Solway Firth. Many, many thanks for taking the time to fully read and comment on my poem, Keng...So many others do not, I am therefore much indebted to you! My very best regards...And warmest wishes. Your friend. :) john

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