Recollections

Thinking about a close friend who died a long time ago:

The days pile up
And the seasons come and go,
The moons wax and wane,
Years continuously flow,
How long will I remember . . .
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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Schude Avatar
December 1, 2011 at 8:36 PM
Sometimes it takes a lifetime to forget someone. I'm sorry for your loss. I felt an abundance of sorrow in your poem. You described the essence of time beautifully.
Brown Avatar
December 1, 2011 at 1:26 PM
Congratulations Jim on your well deserved featured poem this week. Love, Carol
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November 29, 2011 at 3:03 PM
The emotion comes through your words. Well done! Congratulations on having your poem featured. Wishing you ongoing success with your writing. Karen
Burton Avatar
August 2, 2008 at 1:03 PM
forever,I know your friend is honored they are not completely forgotten.
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