Reason A. Poteet Poet Triolet

Reckless Abandon 2

Frankly, you blew it, lost your cool;
you let loose and lambasted him.
Seventy-eight years, you ole fool,
frankly, you blew it, lost your cool.
You aren't ashamed? instead you drool.
Going to the pool for a swim?
Frankly, you blew it, lost your cool;
you let loose and lambasted him.

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Susan Gentry July 27, 2018 at 6:14 PM Congratulations on your win. :) Reason A. Poteet July 28, 2018 at 9:31 PM I appreciate the encouragement you give, Susan.

Eve Roper July 27, 2018 at 6:01 PM Congratulations on your win, Reason . I enjoyed reading this well written poem with great imagery. Hugs Eve Reason A. Poteet July 28, 2018 at 9:32 PM I welcome you commendation and your comment on my piece, Reckless Abandon, Eve. Have a great day.

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart July 25, 2018 at 9:47 AM Congratulations on your top win! xomo Reason A. Poteet July 25, 2018 at 3:34 PM I appreciate your taking time to leave a comment, Maureen. I wrote this one from personal experience.I appreciate your taking time to leave a comment, Maureen. I wrote this one from personal experience.

Richard Lamoureux July 25, 2018 at 8:58 AM Congrats on top placement! Reason A. Poteet July 25, 2018 at 3:30 PM thanks, Richard, I needed that comment.

Caren Krutsinger July 18, 2018 at 5:49 AM I am getting better at biting my lip and not doing this, but reckless abandon is always alive and well when the emotions come out full force. Good luck in the contest.