Recital of the Waves

A low surge of words,
In mellifluous cadence:
Aquatic concert.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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September 8, 2009 at 8:44 PM
Beautiful... I'm A Water - Baby... Something about the motion of the ocean and I could float on this haiku... Keep 'em coming Raul MoonBee
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September 5, 2009 at 11:18 AM
Beautiful... You're Good at those Haiku(s) Read Several - like em' MoonBee
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September 4, 2009 at 11:53 AM
Superb Haiku, another delight on this Friday night>>James
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September 4, 2009 at 4:11 AM
Raul, this Haiku flows so beautifully. Thank you for sharing your amazing writing with us again today. Love, Carol
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September 3, 2009 at 8:44 PM
I can feel and hear the waves!...jim
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September 3, 2009 at 7:17 PM
Beautifuly haiku, Raul. I love the concept of an "Aquatic concert." Love, Carolyn
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September 3, 2009 at 1:07 PM
--musical waves-in a low surge of words in one sweet motion --an aquatic concert--love the last line--bravo--charma
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September 3, 2009 at 12:24 PM
I love the concert those waves give. Being by the water is so peaceful for me. Nice use of personification in this poem. Keep on writing. Karen
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September 3, 2009 at 11:15 AM
After reading you work I dont think i can even think about writing another haiku..lets just go to the beach! love, BG
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September 3, 2009 at 9:50 AM
Soup mail.
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September 3, 2009 at 9:50 AM
Aquatic concert...you are robbing the universe of all the good metaphors..LOL..another number one stunner from the king...
Shahwan Avatar
September 3, 2009 at 8:46 AM
You're a true poet. Lovely haiku. Exact wording. Wishing you all the best.
Richards Avatar
September 3, 2009 at 8:06 AM
And yes...the ocean speaks it's own language!
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