Received Thumbs Down
received the
thumbs down
was a hit and
miss that brings
it back to the
drawing board
of life once more
causing a much
needed change
in direction down
the dirt paved road
leading to the future
and all it's possible
positive unseen
unknown promises
of betterment for all
involved
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