Rebirth of Apollo

Your muscular body glistened

As warm golden streaks of sun

Streamed down on you

You’re standing in the lake

In the level of your sinewy thighs

Where water is solemn and blue

As if your ember like body

Is dipped in the blue

To cool off the hotness within

Are you possessed

with the spirit of Apollo?

You bend your body

Hands stretched forward

Curved back

Ready for the dive,

Indeed you steal

The grace of his bow!

You fling your body

Towards the water

In an instant-

Waves rippled

From the center of you

Bullseye! everywhere you plunge.

Indeed you steal,

The accuracy of his arrow!

Now I’m convinced

That you are indeed

An embodiment of Apollo!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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K. Avatar
July 23, 2010 at 2:32 AM
haha Juan-- where can I find this Apollo guy??? kidding! Very nice descriptions you have here! -- nikko :)
Brown Avatar
July 22, 2010 at 12:13 AM
Abeautiful write.
A  Avatar
July 20, 2010 at 5:31 PM
BRiLLIANT,AND ENJOYED.-SKAT
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July 20, 2010 at 4:53 AM
Excellent write Juan, love the picture you paint here...Michael
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July 20, 2010 at 3:46 AM
Very alluring write that got my attention and held it..Keep the descriptive and expressive writes flowing from your creative pen..Thank for stopping by and commenting on my one word....It means gaining wisdom by comtemplating one's navel..Sara
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July 20, 2010 at 3:02 AM
A wonderful poem, the rebirth of the Apollo, sounds brilliant, enjoyed your poem. Glad to see you post one Juan,..p.d.
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