Rebirth

Those hours between sunrises, waiting
like an autumn ribs, anticipating
wondering if there will be novel surprises
but then falling with withered enterprises
as each evening dies, with no relief

Holding tired memories, as to a jaded crutch
yet still yearning for summer’s touch
with warm, airy breezes of springtime’s allure 
until reasons feel quite good enough and sure
to let go of bonds, in beautiful release

Awakening, only to see that renewal came
while time played its torture game
inspiring new zest and stirring hunger’s fire
arousing mornings of dented heart’s desire
in the rebirth, which sprung all around

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013



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Date: 10/12/2013 4:55:00 PM
I didn't know I was featured, Skat and Linda. This is so thoughtful on your part. Million thanks!
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Date: 8/17/2013 10:52:00 PM
LEON , CONGRATULATIONS on having your poem featured this week........ Love ~SKAT~
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Date: 8/17/2013 10:01:00 PM
Hi Leon, . Congratulations!!! It's nice to see your poem Featured on the soups Home Page, this past week :-) goodnight~ Luv* LINDA .
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Date: 7/30/2013 9:57:00 AM
- Hello new member: Leon. - Welcome to P-Soup. - Thank you for choosing to share your poems here with us. - I look forward to reading more in the future. - Have a good time and I wish you luck. - (Give and receive comments) - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 7/28/2013 6:05:00 PM
Hello Leon, lovely.. -A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. Dropping by to invite you to my latest contest. You will find the contest page on the top left hand side* -Looking forward in following and reading your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy the community, we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 7/28/2013 3:43:00 PM
Hi Leon loved your first poem here.I can picture each imagery unfold as you the skilled artisan paint the message of Rebirth.Welcome to poetrysoup.
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Date: 7/28/2013 12:12:00 PM
like the autumn ribs. powerful image within the thought and the rebirth title. Leon, welcome to the soup. your first poem awakens the every day scenery. ......luv.... Skat
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