Rebirth 2

You make my heart smile
and feel happy for a while.

You make my spirit sing
and I feel like it's Spring.

You make me want to dance.
I'm in a lovely trance.

You make me want to fly
into the cool blue sky.

I'd land upon your earth.
This is my rebirth.


By:  Carole O'Terry Duet
Copyright:  Dec. 9, 2016
"All Rights Reserved"

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Andrea Dietrich

September 15, 2018 at 8:25 PM

this is sure a sweet little gem I found in your oldies!!!

Carole Duet

September 16, 2018 at 1:29 AM

It's so simple but thank you so much, Andrea. Carole :D

Pashang Salehi

December 18, 2016 at 7:41 PM

You must be in love....

Carole Duet

December 18, 2016 at 10:34 PM

Maybe....:-)

Ravi Sathasivam

December 15, 2016 at 12:20 AM

Excellent write. Lovely couplets. Enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing it.

Carole Duet

December 15, 2016 at 1:40 PM

Thank you, Ravi.

White Wolf

December 12, 2016 at 6:56 PM

I love this, Carole! Beautifully written!

Carole Duet

December 13, 2016 at 2:07 AM

Thank you, Bud. Did you read "If I Were An Elephant" yet?

CayCay Godwin

December 12, 2016 at 12:25 PM

I have wondered much about your well being and whereabouts - it is so good to see your face. And I delight in the poem I found as well - it is light weight but packed with an incredible feeling that I have been blessed to know. Not only an incredible emotion, but an ultimate, perfect one! Aint it great when that happens? Poetry hugs, CayCay

Carole Duet

December 13, 2016 at 2:11 AM

Yes it is CayCay! I just wish I could fly. Thanks for your nice comments. And hugs back.