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Limpid logical mind. Euphoria erupts. Nerve endings catapult into nothingness. Stretching slowly, to an endless sanguine sea. You drift timelessly. You slowly regain recognized presence. You are not alone. Tho you see no one, love rests as a dove within, without, flooding your being. I am to be naught? Now, within, I know. I am love edified in God’s glorification. To see me is to know my thoughts, without. No secrets abound. No limitations exist. All one, yet individual. No ownership, no onus, no value stored in secret. We gravitate to an energy of Love which is Him. To Him I sing my song. He is God within, without. He is my central core. He is my coming and going. He is the answer to question. He is my song and inspiration. He is my love and intuition. He is my home forever. © Aug 11 2010 Charles Henderson

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Date: 8/19/2010 5:59:00 AM
LOL you are so cool! just put *The poetic devices used are alliteration, personification, oxymoron, simile Light & Love
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Date: 8/18/2010 5:10:00 PM
Charles, I gravitate to Him as well, especially now with all the stress. Indeed, he is our "home forever." I posted a quick Doctor Phobia contest to get some laughs and reduce stress before my Monday doctor visit. Three forms: limericks, clerihews and rhymes of 10 lines or fewer. Hope you'll check it out. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 8/18/2010 6:35:00 AM
great praise and thanksgiving!! enjoyed reading today!
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Date: 8/18/2010 4:49:00 AM
I find I can appreciate it better in this format with less visual distractions. Certainly it is a very good verse and a concise powerful statement of faith. Out of 15 poets only 2 or 3 have submitted what I would call Free Verse. I think, they are confusing themselfs with the consept of free choice? sigh....I have to figure out what to do advice with be appreciated.
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Date: 8/18/2010 4:06:00 AM
Well expressed holy thoughts on faith, Charles
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