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Rebirth

Brothers are Growing
Standing up strong to the past
New Chapter at last

childhoodhaiku

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Raul Moreno

September 26, 2009 at 10:42 AM

Marvin, congratulations on making the first round of the contest...Raul

September 25, 2009 at 12:18 PM

Congratulations on making it through the first round in the contest. Good luck in the finals! Karen

Elaine George

September 24, 2009 at 5:25 PM

Dear Marvin, Best wishes through to the next round. Lainie

Carolyn Devonshire

September 24, 2009 at 1:59 PM

Marvin, Congratulations on getting through the first round of the poetry contest with your great verse! Luck and love, Carolyn

P Sheart

September 24, 2009 at 1:42 PM

Congrats!! Love Light Truth Patricia

Carol Sunshine Brown

September 24, 2009 at 9:50 AM

Congratulations on your poem making it through the first round .Wishing you the best in the finals. Love, Carol

Laura Mckenzie

August 6, 2009 at 6:46 PM

Congratulations on your featured poem! Laura :0)

Sue Mason

August 6, 2009 at 9:11 AM

Excellent write here, Marvin. I believe it also is the Senryu Form in that a Haiku is about nature while the Senryu is about human beings and is done in the same 5/7/5/ form. There are so many Forms here at the Soup ... LOL ... and this is a great selection to be a feature this week!! Congratulations!