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Rebirth

Brothers are Growing
Standing up strong to the past
New Chapter at last

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Raul Moreno

Date: 9/26/2009 10:42:00 AM

Marvin, congratulations on making the first round of the contest...Raul

Date: 9/25/2009 12:18:00 PM

Congratulations on making it through the first round in the contest. Good luck in the finals! Karen

Elaine George

Date: 9/24/2009 5:25:00 PM

Dear Marvin, Best wishes through to the next round. Lainie

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 9/24/2009 1:59:00 PM

Marvin, Congratulations on getting through the first round of the poetry contest with your great verse! Luck and love, Carolyn

P Sheart

Date: 9/24/2009 1:42:00 PM

Congrats!! Love Light Truth Patricia

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 9/24/2009 9:50:00 AM

Congratulations on your poem making it through the first round .Wishing you the best in the finals. Love, Carol

Laura Mckenzie

Date: 8/6/2009 6:46:00 PM

Congratulations on your featured poem! Laura :0)

Sue Mason

Date: 8/6/2009 9:11:00 AM

Excellent write here, Marvin. I believe it also is the Senryu Form in that a Haiku is about nature while the Senryu is about human beings and is done in the same 5/7/5/ form. There are so many Forms here at the Soup ... LOL ... and this is a great selection to be a feature this week!! Congratulations!

Michael Jordan

Date: 8/3/2009 7:47:00 PM

Marvin this is an excellent haiku - so much said in a very cleaver way - God Bless, MJ