William Kelii Kekaula Poet Quatern

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Rebirth

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Rebirth

Reborn here now without baggage,
you are gifted midst distinction,
referred by divine tutelage,
ne'er stray from His homing beacon.

Your external chapters have changed,
reborn here now without baggage,
verse by verse you are petitioned,
The Word, wills you, to acknowledge.

Keep the faith helps to encourage,
goodwill build trusts and open doors,
reborn here now without baggage,
your light on the hill, new soul scores.

Shine o'er the realm, your rebuilt home,
dawn birthrights, 'tis be your New Age,
unshackled and weightless to roam,
reborn here now without baggage.

2021 October 03
*1st Place*
Dawn
~~Unseeking Seeker: Judged 2021 October 18

RZ, WH checked
HMS, PS checked

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Andrea Dietrich October 24, 2021 at 1:59 PM wonderful trophy win, William. A big congrats to you William Kelii Kekaula October 24, 2021 at 3:06 PM Thanks, Andrea, as 'tis a rarity for me, Aloha!

Paulette Calasibetta October 22, 2021 at 9:27 AM Congratulations on your win! A masterful piece! Blessings, Paulette William Kelii Kekaula October 22, 2021 at 9:35 AM I'm grateful, Paulette, for your wonderful sharing! Peace and joy, Aloha!

Sam Kauffman October 20, 2021 at 9:29 AM William, congratulations on your win. It echoes the verse "unless a man be born again." This is quite wonderful - reborn in the Word "unshackled and weightless," "to roam." So many eloquent lines one flowing on the other like waves reaching the shore in stunning brilliance. This is impressive! Blessings my friend. Aloha. Sam Kauffman October 22, 2021 at 11:06 AM I hope all is well, William. In my prayers. Blessings of Aloha and grace my friend! William Kelii Kekaula October 20, 2021 at 12:07 PM My wake in breathlessness is remembered, Sam, as affairs occasioned me, having but 7 poems made in the whole of September. Walk with Grace my friend, Aloha!

Beata Agustin October 20, 2021 at 12:19 AM Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this inspirational and spiritual muse of yours... I'm delighted especially with your third stanza. God bless you. William Kelii Kekaula October 20, 2021 at 12:49 AM Blessings, Beata, I'm pleased with your kind thoughtfulness my friend, Aloha!

Paula Goldsmith October 19, 2021 at 11:01 AM Congratulations on your win. Your "Rebirth" is a beautiful story/write and picture. Have a blessed autumn day.......... William Kelii Kekaula October 19, 2021 at 4:43 PM My thanks, Paula, for your generous considerations my friend, Aloha!

Meghan Hutchings October 18, 2021 at 7:23 PM Congratulations on a beautiful and emotional example of the power words have in the hands of an incredibly talented poet! When I write and teach, I tell my students that they must evoke emotion to be effective, and you have certainly done that! Way to go!! William Kelii Kekaula October 18, 2021 at 11:19 PM Your welcomed expressions overwhelm me to no end, Meghan, I am truly grateful for your meaningful words my friend. Peace and joy, Aloha!

Regina Mcintosh October 18, 2021 at 2:49 PM Congrats with your wonderful write. God bless you, Love, Gina William Kelii Kekaula October 18, 2021 at 2:56 PM Thanks, Gina, for spreading the love -- your gift overflows my friend, Aloha!

Karen Jones October 18, 2021 at 1:27 PM Congrats on a well deserved win! William Kelii Kekaula October 18, 2021 at 2:02 PM Heartfelt thanks, Karen, enjoy your blessed path my friend, Aloha!

Jenna Logan October 18, 2021 at 10:22 AM Upon reading His Word, life changes in so many wonderful ways. Congratulations on your outstanding write, William. William Kelii Kekaula October 18, 2021 at 10:53 AM Thank you, Jenna, for your time and thought-filled expressions my friend! A blessed welcoming, Aloha!

Kim Rodrigues October 18, 2021 at 9:37 AM Love the line: verse by verse you are petitioned. Congratulations, William! William Kelii Kekaula October 18, 2021 at 10:50 AM Thanks, Kim, for what occasioned my writ was truly spirit-led my friend, blessings, and Aloha!

Unseeking Seeker October 18, 2021 at 6:40 AM Congrats on your top trophy win, with this outstanding poem, William! Thank you for participating and look forward to your entry in the next Quietus contest coming up! William Kelii Kekaula October 18, 2021 at 9:53 AM I'm truly honored, US, for this wondrous spirit-uplifting surprise my friend! I'll give it a try as my presence here at PS has been rare of late w/Sept 7 posted poems. Blessings to you and your loved ones, Aloha!

Sotto Poet October 7, 2021 at 6:33 PM What a beautiful poem you've written; your lyricism and artistry are unrivaled; this is a delicate and lovely piece of poetry. William Kelii Kekaula October 7, 2021 at 6:53 PM Words of warming affections that thoroughly complete a succession of welcoming understanding of your astute mind, Lasaad! Own the tiding of gladness at your doorstep my friend, Aloha!