Rebirth

water
splashes
against my tired face
courses down
my front
then my
back
revives
listless feet
I emerge
greet
the world
in love again
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Krutsinger Avatar
April 12, 2021 at 6:25 AM
It is refreshing and rejuvenating, water. Well penned.
DiMino Avatar
April 9, 2021 at 9:00 PM
Love my baths and showers; not that I particularly want to be clean...but when soaking, I am buoyant and entirely pain free. The cat thinks I'm crazy...but he has an adverse opinion about most everything I do. Got to love him.
Rodrigues Avatar
April 9, 2021 at 6:13 PM
Awesome!
Ligon Avatar
April 9, 2021 at 10:02 AM
Great way to face the world afresh. Sounds like an inward cleansing as well.
Sands Avatar
April 9, 2021 at 7:09 AM
Greeting the world with love again. Very nice Gershon. I hope all is ok and you have a nice day :)
Wolf Avatar
April 10, 2021 at 8:49 PM
Heidi, thank you for your encouragement, and here's wishing you a Happy Weekend. :) gw
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