Rebirth

water splashes against my tired face courses down my front then my back revives listless feet I emerge greet the world in love again

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Caren Krutsinger

Date: 4/12/2021 6:25:00 AM

It is refreshing and rejuvenating, water. Well penned.

Joe Dimino

Date: 4/9/2021 9:00:00 PM

Love my baths and showers; not that I particularly want to be clean...but when soaking, I am buoyant and entirely pain free. The cat thinks I'm crazy...but he has an adverse opinion about most everything I do. Got to love him.

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 4/9/2021 6:13:00 PM

Awesome!

Juliet Ligon

Date: 4/9/2021 10:02:00 AM

Great way to face the world afresh. Sounds like an inward cleansing as well.

Heidi Sands

Date: 4/9/2021 7:09:00 AM

Greeting the world with love again. Very nice Gershon. I hope all is ok and you have a nice day :)

Gershon Wolf
Date: 4/10/2021 8:49:00 PM

Heidi, thank you for your encouragement, and here's wishing you a Happy Weekend. :) gw