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- 'Rebels' Was Their Name - 7

"REBELS" WAS THEIR NAME

Judge not, that ye be not judged.
 Matthew 7:1-3 KJV
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Each fair familiar feature of their face  
aglows with the dim lit day's assistance, 
rests upon strong shoulders reminiscent 
of roses bloom, see their trust and proud grace. 
Before those  same  red  cheeks  were  flags  of  shame;
tearing at their hearts, rebels they were named.
Who knows, are they friends, sisters, or lovers?
They don't look alike but but they live strong,
telling their own truth stopped rumor's hover,
truth clears the blind eyes, errs are not lifelong.
While the shrinking sun delights in its role,
can they sustain falsehood, forgive such ways?
They chose to stand strong, still in mute dismay
but in their bosoms dwell two holy souls.
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~~Inspired by the painting: Twilight Confidances 
by Cecilia Beaux 1888~~

__Olive Eloisa D. Guillermo__
4:30 pm; January 17, 2015
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Guzzi Avatar
February 5, 2016 at 8:50 AM
Today I will start a new challenge on sonnets! watch for the blog! Light & Love Olive
Fraser Avatar
February 4, 2016 at 1:34 PM
Again not an easy painting to write about, but your wonderful poetry gives the readers ideas from your mind as to what it's all about ~ way to go girl ~ hugs//James xx
Callus Avatar
February 1, 2016 at 11:13 AM
Excellent, Olive_eloi! You contemplate and probe for answers, although at the back of your mind you already have your own answers. Hugs // paul
A   Avatar
January 25, 2016 at 10:02 PM
OLIVE, THANK YOU for blessing my comment with a reply. THAT WAS NICE OF YOU!!! PD**
Morris Brady Avatar
January 21, 2016 at 12:39 PM
What a poem! Very strong, powerful. Chrissie
Guzzi Avatar
January 20, 2016 at 7:45 PM
Wonderful work Olive! Light & Love
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
February 4, 2016 at 11:09 PM
thank you so much Debbie.. =`) I have never made this better if not because of you.. =`) thanks! hugs and smiles!
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January 20, 2016 at 1:49 PM
Very beautiful and inspiring , great write dear as always, hugs / / :) dalia
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
January 29, 2016 at 3:06 AM
thank you so much Dalia.. =`) hugs back!
A   Avatar
January 20, 2016 at 11:56 AM
love the inspiration this reflected on you, enjoyed the read Olive:) -*Luv Linda*
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
January 22, 2016 at 3:18 AM
Lollie Linda, thanks much that you enjoyed this read.. =`)hugs!
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January 20, 2016 at 2:42 AM
That fifth line is simply sensational, in fact there are number of stunning lines here. A definite 7
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
January 21, 2016 at 3:17 AM
Mark, I would say this one of the hard poems I did.. I don't know how to attack the painting but weeeeee, what Inspired is the way their faces are painted, one facing forward, one sideways, wearing same uniform, with the painting title confidances then there.. =`) thanks!
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