Rebellious Voyage

Shadows of fading Clouds
Staring on Ice tubes
As People proclaims goodness 
Sent me a receipt and stamp 
Another Common hypocrisy
Creating a false and confuse universe 
Interesting game 

Listen to the poets songs 
The dancing dragon
Are we restricted to express
A Cage of Morality ?
A Bondage of Art Humanity ?
In the name of holy hypocrisy...

O! Liberating  Universe 
Remind Us 
Cause
You and me are free Souls
Sons and Daughters of freedom 
Share your nude souls 
In our Rebellious Voyage 

A liberated
Souls and Artists
Crafting our destiny
Unrestricted Pen and Ink 
Unite then triumph shall it be!

This poem inspired by rules Which will limited our expression capability 

Christmas night 09

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009



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Date: 1/22/2012 9:45:00 PM
ISA, i like the crafting image.. the pen has no stop,,,,aslong as it never runs out of ink... the rebel voyage will always have limits.. enjoyed your expression in your poem~a very deeppoem.. thank you for sharing your poem,.. always,..p.d.
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Date: 5/8/2011 8:01:00 AM
wow!'JUST A WORD' brought me here. :)
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Date: 2/23/2010 8:31:00 AM
wise words, i love your poetry, take a look at my poem, Peace And Love, love Simone
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