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Rebellious Rhapsody

Rebellions Rhapsody


She had earned the sapphire talisman
freed herself from need’s plethoric drive
ceased longing for the dulcet drone
of felicity’s failing evanescence.
The chrysalis of crumbling youth -
idyllic illusion – awakening
her radiant, rhapsodic rebellion.



John G. Lawless
1/21/2016


Silent One's - 10 word challenge 

Plethora, Evanescent, Felicity, Rhapsodic, Idyllic, Dulcet, Chrysalis, Radiant, Sapphire, Talisman

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Date: 1/23/2016 3:50:00 PM
You managed to squeeze all ten into a very short one..Enjoyed reading your creation..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara
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Date: 1/23/2016 3:16:00 AM
you've used the words in such great way John...well written
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Date: 1/22/2016 9:47:00 AM
Well that was concise, John. You got them all in and it made perfect sense...good job!
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John Lawless
Date: 1/22/2016 10:21:00 AM
Lin, I always like to see if I can get the "words" to play nice together.

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