Seren Roberts Poet Tanka

Re-Awakened - Team Work Contest Poem 1

Her heart stirred, she smiled
                                             looking at the face she loved.
                                             His eyes mirrored hope
                                             remembering their lost love
                                             crushed by fate, re-awakened

                                             Penned on 26/08/2013 using
                                             Form :  Tanka  by
                                             Wayland Bunch and Seren Roberts
                                             Contest  :   Team Work

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Russell Sivey August 28, 2013 at 3:59 PM This is so beautiful, such a gorgeous write my friend! I really enjoyed reading this enlightening poem this evening! What a powerful piece, I just love the tenderness that's all about it! Great Work!! Seren Roberts August 28, 2013 at 4:18 PM Thank you Russell......Seren

Charmaine Chircop August 28, 2013 at 3:55 PM I love the line 'his eyes mirrored hope'..Gives me the deep feel of re awekining and new beginnings to same old flames..Lovely. Seren Roberts August 28, 2013 at 4:18 PM Thanks Charmaine for your kind comment ...Seren