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Reassuring Positive Vibes

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What is a smile, and why was it made? How did we grasp that we should be laid? It returns as soon as we do, and it remains. A half-grin, a full smile, and a hidden gains Smiles are visible and may persist for a time. Sharing one is giving the apex of the sublime.  Where did they originate in the first place? Is it a clear display of one's heart mood pace? For what does the cosmos hold? Your face is all I lack to stay bold. Only your voice offers me such delight. I can just fly if I view your smile ignite. All I needed to view were your eyes. Surely you didn't grip who I was in ties? You were cutting off my iron gear. Your bright grin blew me away here.
Written: July 31, 2022

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Date: 8/2/2022 7:27:00 PM
The power of a smile is beautifully exemplied . It spreads positive vibes around. As soon as we smile at another, it is reciprocated. A smile wins over others and melts the hardness in them, if any. Great penning, dear Lasaad !
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Date: 7/31/2022 1:29:00 PM
Nothing more welcoming than a pleasant smile. Positive vibes you convey, Lasaad.
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Date: 7/31/2022 11:28:00 AM
Poet Sotto Lasaad, This gives off positive energy, humor, fun and stresses of genuine humanness! Well done...ab Hello from the Mediterranean!!
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