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REAPING AND RELISHING SAPODILLA PLUMS Reaching out towards freshness all ripened, Holding onto huge branches hovering high, Not bothered about tan getting deepened, I hand pluck lush naseberries straight from the sky; Savouring sweetness with a satisfied sigh. 2nd August, 2017

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Date: 8/29/2017 6:40:00 PM
The last line just brought a sweet flavor to this lovely poem.
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Date: 8/27/2017 6:06:00 PM
YUM! I would like to pluck one "straight from the sky."
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Date: 8/25/2017 8:56:00 AM
Hi Jo , nice to meet , never had but will soon , beautiful write lovely flow ::)))hugs from Ireland
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Date: 8/14/2017 2:12:00 PM
I was so delighted to read your poem..Thanks for the entry in my contest your participation was encouraging and uplifting to me..This reads like an excellent fruit to add to our diet..It is something that we don't see in the grocery store though..Congrats on your placement..Sara
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Date: 8/12/2017 7:10:00 AM
Congratulations for your win :)
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Date: 8/11/2017 8:02:00 PM
Congrats on your win Jo
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Date: 8/10/2017 4:56:00 AM
Love it. My mother made the best plum jam back in the day. Simply can not buy store bought plum jams like that today.. Homemade biscuits spread with her plum jam or blackberry preserves was to die for. Great poem my friend... A fav..
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Date: 8/9/2017 11:34:00 AM
Plucked from the sky.... I love that image. Beautiful
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Date: 8/7/2017 4:40:00 PM
That's a poem that makes the mouth water! Makes me want to try that fruit. :) Good one, Jo.
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Date: 8/7/2017 11:17:00 AM
looks like avocado to me, but no matter what, i find this artword truly invigorating, jo... beautifully done.. huggs
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Date: 8/7/2017 10:46:00 AM
Oh this is yummy! Just like the fruit. I especially love the fourth line :))
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Date: 8/6/2017 6:12:00 AM
Poetry at its best! Great visual! Love it, Jo! <3
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Date: 8/6/2017 4:06:00 AM
Oh takes me back to my tree climbing days when I climbed to reach black berries. Wow naseberries, never heard of them before. This is a juicy lovely poem. Enjoyed reading. Pls do write your thoughts about my latest poem too, under it.
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Date: 8/5/2017 8:03:00 PM
wow, this is amazing. One of the best quintains I have seen recently. Gosh, I sure would love to try that fruit. What do they taste like? Papaya?
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Date: 8/5/2017 2:39:00 AM
How deliciously poetic and inviting dear sister, Jo! Loved it!
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Date: 8/5/2017 2:06:00 AM
I know this fruit. We call it sapeda and chiku. Perhaps the english name is Sapodilla as well. Sweet poem about this sweet fruit.
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Date: 8/5/2017 7:05:00 AM
You're right, Afzal, we call it Sapota in Tamil and it's Chiku in Hindi. I never knew it was called Naseberries or Sapodilla plums till I wrote this poem ;)
Date: 8/5/2017 1:52:00 AM
Wonderful write Jo..best wishes
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Date: 8/5/2017 12:47:00 AM
A very sweet and fruitful quintain, Jo...god bless...^WW^
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Date: 8/4/2017 10:14:00 AM
Lovely, Jo. I have never heard of this fruit; thanks for including pictures.
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Date: 8/4/2017 5:55:00 AM
- I do not know this fruit, Jo - but sounds delicious :) - Lovely poem - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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