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Really Bad Poetry From a Really Good Egg

Alexadrine’s gobbledygook:
Heidi morning was a beautiful dream
The whirlwind’s skinny day contemplation 
                                    loved by the moon
                                It wants my mom
I spell congratulations
                 w-o-n-d-e-r-f-u-l       We were!
Our wonderful bells bells bells bells day
                      Oh no
I love my other grandma’s
            every grandma
      I love you fams
AWkqskqks,wsllwvmfkrheuuueuruueod
kekekkdjguirufitokfhekk
jfkkfkjkflfmfkoqajehgkgkgllrkkjhmgkgkkgklsl
In the end he couldn’t help the bleep
of his vogotten speech - he says it’s french
don’t believe him   go back
to the beginning of Alexadrine’s...

5/30/2020
Vogon Poetry (really bad poetry) Quoopisk Poetry Contest
Sponsor: Team Poetry Soup

*The Bells by Edgar Allen Poe
**Much of this was from a page my five year old grandson wrote.
I try to promote poetry and he said it was his poem.
He used the microphone for some of this.

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Date: 6/2/2020 2:08:00 AM
Hilarious Kim. Fun to read; a delight.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/2/2020 4:06:00 PM
Thank you, Caren!
Date: 5/31/2020 6:07:00 PM
Fair play to your Grandson Kim, he's playing with words and that's a great sign that he will follow in Grandma's footsteps. Tom
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/31/2020 6:30:00 PM
Love it! Thanks :)
Date: 5/31/2020 6:20:00 AM
Oh this is really good... I see the potential in your grandson lol
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Date: 5/31/2020 6:20:00 AM
Oh this is really good... I see the potential in your grandson lol
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/31/2020 6:24:00 AM
Thank you! Hugs!
Date: 5/31/2020 2:44:00 AM
this is too good to be bad Kim !!so glad you are passing on your love of poetry - it is a gift to your grandchild!!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/31/2020 4:44:00 AM
Thank you, sweet Jan :)
Date: 5/31/2020 1:07:00 AM
If I have time, I'll give it a go. Great write Kim. Blessings, Jennifer.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/31/2020 4:44:00 AM
Thank you, my friend!
Date: 5/30/2020 11:22:00 PM
I like the way you did yours, lovely, I wasn't sure what to write just guessed as I did my Sijo. Good luck
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/31/2020 4:44:00 AM
Thank you, Eve! :)
Date: 5/30/2020 10:58:00 PM
Wow, this is different, love it.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/31/2020 4:44:00 AM
Thank you, Harry! :)
Date: 5/30/2020 9:57:00 PM
So sweet . Love to you and prayers too, Bless you always, Gina
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/31/2020 4:45:00 AM
Thank you, Regina! Blessings and all to you :)
Date: 5/30/2020 6:21:00 PM
The Vogon part is amusing but more than that I love the innocence of expressions by your grandson and the title you have used is really sweet :)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/31/2020 4:45:00 AM
Thank you, Aditi!

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