Notes About The Poem
Dream within dreams
Unseeking Seeker contest
Written 21/11/2024
Reality of dreams
stumbling, my way through the maze,
for what purpose and going where?
evening is thickening in to darkness,
a vague fleeting thought of where am I?
no one to call to, no one to share life with,
just legless sojourn and in a pointless daze,
a hint of hunger, of fear and fatigue,
as I suddenly come to a clearing of open field,
walk through miles of soggy land,
but still that worrying thought,
where am I?
A familiar house to my left, bricks
and windows with no one inside,
just darkness, silence and emptiness,
I walk through the walls and past the house,
and seep through rocks in the backyard,
no one, there, no one at all.
How loneliness travels past fields of love,
seeking answers to questions that are long lost,
a dream, a trance or a reality that is trapped
deep with in me.
Thoughts travel through the dread
of unconquered reality, that sometimes are a reflection
of the dreams, that reverberate through the
unending maze of conscience.
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