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Dream within dreams

Unseeking Seeker contest

Written 21/11/2024

stumbling, my way through the maze,
for what purpose and going where?
evening is thickening in to darkness,
a vague fleeting thought of where am I?
no one to call to, no one to share life with,
just legless sojourn and in a pointless daze,
a hint of hunger, of fear and fatigue,
as I suddenly come to a clearing of open field,
walk through miles of soggy land,
but still that worrying thought,
where am I?
A familiar house to my left, bricks 
and windows with no one inside, 
just darkness, silence and emptiness,
I walk through the walls and past the house,
and seep through rocks in the backyard,
no one, there, no one at all.
How loneliness travels past fields of love,
seeking answers to questions that are long lost,
a dream, a trance or a reality that is trapped
deep with in me. 
Thoughts travel through the dread
of unconquered reality, that sometimes are a reflection
of the dreams, that reverberate through the
unending maze of conscience.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2024



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Date: 11/22/2024 1:27:00 AM
Great poem Krish and l agree somewhere deep in a dream is some sort reality though hard to find sometimes!! Debx
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 11/22/2024 1:39:00 AM
Thanks Deb! Indeed! Sometimes dreams bring a flicker of the unseen future!
Date: 11/21/2024 3:28:00 PM
Hello Krish, How are you? I hope all is well with you. Now that is a strange dream you had. Are you tring to figure it out? I am still trying to figure out my strange dream. Enjoy your evening my friend. /Darlene/
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 11/23/2024 11:19:00 AM
Krish, i am still trying to figure it out. I wonder what connection my dream has to a real event. blessings my friend. /Darlene/ It is good that you are busy. Mewrry Christmas in advance.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 11/23/2024 11:16:00 AM
Hello Krish, You are welcome. Oh! the dream i had was so real it woke me up. I ma in a sound sleep, my cat sparkles on the left side of me. On my right side it felt like a body laid down beside me. I woke up fast. It took me a while to go back to sleep. I searched my room for something to see that might be there. There was nothing. I had a hard to to get back to sleep. i have no idea what that dream meant.
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 11/21/2024 11:26:00 PM
Thanks Darlene! I am very well and busy with my career! Good to hear from you and hope all well with you! Dreams are dreams but they have some connection to real events!
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